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Things are getting really interesting now. Sasuke and Naruto are getting closer and closer. The smut this chapter was expertly written. I understand Naruto's hesitation though. Even though they have a crush on one another, there are things that might stand in their way. I hope they can solve that. They both deserve to be happy. XD

So happy they have reachid this now ^^ i totally enjoy the smexy scene ^^ i do hoep things for them get better xDD

Love your story, look forward to it every week now! Can't wait to see how things go with the 2 and how other characters are going to react :) Top kudos!!

I was wondering if his situation with Sasuke was making Naruto a little uncomfortable and it looks like it is. Naruto has Sasuke all to himself when he's at home and they even sleep in the same bed, but in actuality, he doesn't have him at all. That has to be kind of painful to be as close to your crush as Naruto is to Sasuke, but for Sasuke to both be keeping secrets from him and to not return his feelings (or so Naruto thinks). It's fine for right now since Naruto is hiding secrets of his own and hasn't made himself vulnerable emotionally to Sasuke, but if they were even more open with each other then even more feelings would get involved.

Will Sasuke even remember the kiss? GHB causes memory loss for several hours after a person takes it. You've probably Googled all this and know more than I do, but I think I remember reading somewhere that if you're really intoxicated when you take it, the memory loss effects can be ten times longer. Sasuke wasn't drunk when he took it but with his Zoloft, wouldn't that majorly up not just the disorientation he felt from the drug but the memory loss effects as well?

The more I read it, the more I like it. It’s good that you consider all possibilities for their relationship, not only love. I like Sasuke self-reflection and Naruto’s smiling hopelessness. It’s both outside, on the surface, tangible and somewhere deep inside them. Yep, they might have ended up as best friends. But they won’t, will they?
Naruto’s ‘demons’, whatever they may be, had been hidden well, while Sasuke’s open to the reader, from the very beginning. Could it mean that the secrets the blonde is keeping to himself are that ugly?
Yep, Sasuke may not be a ‘good guy’ at all, just as Naruto may turn not to be a harmless, optimistic person he ‘s been trying to seem. I hate constant Naruto-victimization in the fandom, so I hope his secrets aren’t only about the things done *to him*.

Sasuke promised to explain what he’d meant by the kiss. But does he know?

And yes, I think so far Sasuke has got it easy, he’s been very lucky. Naruto & Itachi aren’t exactly his guardian angels but very similar to them. What if…?
One more thing: the guy decided to break with his friends after the party. But can Naruto be a good replacement to them, especially now, after the kiss and following very emotional explanations-complications? Isn’t it too much for a gut like Sasuke? Neither friend, nor lover, what’s the use of it, for both of them? It can get awkward and embarrassing.

Will Kabuto pay, anyhow, for his little treat for friends? Hope he will.

One more thing that I liked was the hint at Naruto’s physical strength in the previous chapter. Is he, what, incredibly strong under that skinny flesh and bones? Please write about this aspect, it’s interesting.
Thank you and please keep on such wonderful work!

Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, life has been hectic. you have been doing an excellent job on the story so far and I can't wait to read what you have coming up for our two favorite boys. keep up the good work.

Beautiful new chapter! Keep it up (:

Ahhhhh. Just read the entire story in one go. Really good! But where is Sasuke going to go? :/ So nervous he's going to get caught by the police
Keep going!

I find myself waiting for updates to this story; it just so happens to be one of the best I've ever read on AFF.net! It's great work, and it just keeps getting better!

Oh boy, what's going to happen to Sasuke now? Supposing the police find him wandering around disoriented? With his track record, would the authorities be willing to give him the benefit of the doubt about a friend drugging his drink without his knowledge? Hell, would Itachi be willing to give him the benefit of the doubt after the shoplifting incident? It's all very sad, really. A change in friends may be in order for Sasuke, otherwise he might continue getting into these kinds of situations. (I know, easier said than done.) Among Sasuke's friends, Juugo is the only one who looks out for him, but it might be awkward to remain friendly with him while dumping Karin, Suigetsu, and Kabuto. Mind you, I don't think Karin and Suigetsu are that bad, but they don't help things either. Well, can't wait to see where you take this fic next. Does Sasuke get lucky, or will the be the event that radically changes things in his life, or maybe somewhere in between...?