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I'm still enjoying this, really love the way it's written and how naturally the story progresses. Keep up the good work.

At first when I saw your summary of the story, it did not really appeal to me and I chose not to read it. But I kept seeing the story title coming back, so I decided to read it. I looove it. The concept is great and your writing is very nice to read. I'll be waiting every week for you to update, so keep up the good work! (:

I like it even more since last time! They are so CUTE together, it's crazy!!

Hii! I'm loving this story so far and I love the idea behind it! I keep having fangirl moments at just how cute sasuke is to Naruto! Keep up the good work and please update soon :)

I absolutely love this. This is my top favorite story to read on here. Please keep it up and on top of everything, please don't stop updating no matter what! I would love to see how Sasuke's and Naruto's relationship evolves over time.

I look forward to each chapter of this story being posted. Chapter 11 was excellent. I like how Sasuke's self-destructive tendencies are there but, so far, haven't caused irredeemable damage. I like how he and Itachi are alike enough to say things that they don't mean when they are angry but love each other enough to try and make things right again, even though those words come so much less easily. I like how Naruto helped Sasuke by reminding him that he did not mean what he said and therefore that the same was probably true of Itachi. I am frightened because I can imagine a judge saying to Itachi, "You hit him?" or "You did not know that an underage runaway was living in your house?" and that leading to Sasuke being taken away. A reader only starts worrying about the characters when a story is delightfully real.

I'm glad that Sasuke won't be stealing anymore. That was like a weakness that didn't quite fit. I liked the interaction between Sasuke and Itachi too. Having his brother and Naruto find out has to be the worst punishment and I think that will keep him from ever doing it again. He doesn't want to disappoint Itachi but Naruto also showed how honest he was when he did not keep that man's wallet so he wouldn't want Naruto to think less of him either. I'm glad Naruto was there to comfort Sasuke... he really needed that.

Well, maybe our universe Sasuke would never do it, but "The Road to Ninja" Sasuke is totally all about "jockin da bithcez and doin my sweat thang baby." ;)

don't lie... don't lie... don't lie (fingers crossed)

I feel that all this growing attraction, flirting, tension or whatever, one-sided or not, will come to no good. Naruto started to *feel*, associate Sasuke with something good. With his confessions, it will lay Naruto even more vulnerable and force him to eventually leave Sasuke. But I really enjoyed their conversation in the shower! Direct to the point of indecency, still so innocent. Openneness, innocent and provocative. Love it in him.
Naruto's helpless teasing and attempts at humour are really touching. Maybe it'd be better not to find out anything that would lay him even more vulnerable?...
Sasuke's exploring the boundaries of their friendship is also very interesting. Will Naruto make a move on him? What will Sasuke do? He's definitely not ready to accept or reject whatever the boy feels for him. One step - and Naruto is in the streets again.
At least Sasuke was honest not to promise anything more than a temporary shelter.
Is Naruto really so *unfamiliar* with the situation? He'd been moving in a few times before, and Sasuke's home isn't a palace.
Will that Jiraya make an appearance? How did Sasuke manage to keep his room tidy, really? : ))
Naruto "had had worse". What could it possibly mean?
Oh, and Itachi and Sasuke's realtionship is one more nice aspect of the story. I like them together.
Really like it all and can't wait to read more. Keep telling it with a touch of irony, it just emphasizes the seriousness of Naruto's "doing just fine" situation.