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I really like this story. I can't wait to hear both Naruto's and Sasuke's backgrounds! And I wonder what will happen when Itachi finds out they have a homeless guy living in their house? Will the others from school find out? Will this budding SOMETHING bloom into more? I'm waiting, with popcorn!

I read this alternately between here and ff.net. I was curious when I came across the summary and sorry that I waited until I caught up to the last chapter to leave a comment. This is a pretty interesting concept, not the usual highschool!au's I've read. I also love how you reveal details about the boy's backgrounds gradually and still leave questions left unanswered. I love how natural the dynamic between Sasuke and Naruto is and not forced.

They are SO going to get caught. They very nearly got caught after being at Sasuke's house for just a few hours. Itachi isn't around much, but he's smart, and no matter how neat and quiet Naruto tries to be, there will always be signs of a different person being in the house, like the bread having been put back into the refrigerator in a strange way, or a piece of Naruto's laundry getting mixed in with Sasuke's, or a million other little telltale signs that Itachi will start picking up on, even if he doesn't initially put all the pieces together. Or maybe it won't even come down to anything as subtle as that; Naruto could fall asleep on the couch one day and Itachi could unexpectedly come home early and find him like that. Either way, they better start having the difficult discussions about what happens next very soon; otherwise, the situation will be taken out of their hands once Itachi finds out...

Love it! Love it! Love it! Hate waiting for new chapters though. :(

Yay, Sasuke is helping Naruto get off the streets. :) I'm happy for them both, but it won't work out as easily as Sasuke would like it to. Itachi will eventually notice and then where will Naruto go? But still, it's a good first step. Maybe staying with Sasuke for a little bit will help remind Naruto what having a roof over his head felt like. And maybe that will make it easier to talk him into looking for a more permanent solution to his homelessness instead of continuing to stay on the streets. Can't wait for the next update!

This is so cute.<3 I can't wait to see how they'll get away with this living arrangement. Will Itachi catch them in a compromising position?

Your story struck me as light, well-developed, not rushed and quite natural. Its plot may not seem *very* original, but it's not that often that we can see a non-preaching-peace-and-love-forgiveness Naruto, who's not aggressively intruding into Sasuke's life, and a quite adequate, not excessively moody or bllodthirsty Sasuke. They may both be lost and wandering, but they seem real, warm and alive.
Hope it'll continue this way.
I wonder why Naruto doesn't try to occupy himself in some way.. he may not have documents or education, but there's always a way. Does he have any friends, fellow hobos or something? I just can't imagine a guy like him doing nothing begging for some money.. and he has a way with people, so...?

All the best and good luck with your writing!

Aw... that was really nice. I always like friendship stuff with them--even more than sexy timez, actually. (PWP is a dime a dozen, but when they have a real bond, I'm always reminded of why I liked this couple in the first place.) And they were comfortable enough with each other that other people thought they were dating. :) I also liked the hints about Naruto's past in this chapter. I hope Sasuke eventually asks him about some of the stuff he let drop (his ex-boyfriend, the tough year Naruto says he had, and even about his face). Can't wait for the next chapter!

Aw, poor Naruto :( My heart bleeds for him. But no matter how hard life gets, he always tries to have a positive and sunny attitude. I'm glad Sasuke is warming up to him. Naruto deserves some love.

Please update this! I'm very interested to see what's going to happen next.:3