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for Soup's On

by OfFansAndFlames

person Daga
schedule March 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for every chapter, I hope you will be able to continue as usual cause, as always, I can't wait to read what's next! I wish you and your family all the best, I send you big hugs and lots of positive thinking, we don't know each other but you bring me a lot of joy with your wonderful story :)
person Roanae
schedule February 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMGoodness! I can't tell you how much I absolutely love this story. And that last chapter...*speechless with glee. Can't wait for the next update, keep up the awesome work!
schedule February 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Omg, I'm actually teary-eyed from this chapter! You are the most wonderful writer on this site, perfect grammar and penmanship greet with every new chapter and I find find myself disappointed that the chapter has to end. Please please please see this story until the very end, I am in love with it.
person kit
schedule February 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This last two chapters were great. I'm glad naruto decided to stay.
I loved reading juugo's reaction to naruto's inappropriate description of the situation. It was great!
I look forward to itachi's reaction about what transgressed while he was asleep.
person Lil JJ
schedule February 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh snap!!!! He found him...yes please be merciful and update the next chapter ASAP I'm obsessed with this story
person AlienixX
schedule February 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really hope it was Naruto they'd found there, just because two years is too much.
It's not that Naruto's stupid or else, he had no luck and was so desperate.
May Sasuke have mercy on the guy in his current state and may they both find some way out of this together :)
Was very sorry for Jiraya's demise. I thought he'd help Naruto out again some way in the story...
Thank you!
person Daga
schedule February 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read next chapter!!!!
person qwerty
schedule February 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! You stopped it too soon! Can't wait to see if Naruto actually comes back.
person qwerty
schedule February 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG *crying forever* that had to be one of the saddest chapters you've written and there has been some tear-jerkers in this story.
schedule January 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awww, poor Naruto. It must be hard for him, not really knowing what will happen. I didn't expect him to leave though so that was a nice cliffhanger. I'm dying to know where he took off to and what he's planning. Great chapter!