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for Soup's On

by OfFansAndFlames

person AlienixX
schedule January 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
First impression: I knew, I knew he was going to take to streets again, but.. it's so muuch harder now.
It's going to crush Sasuke in all the ways. And to hell with logical, reasonable wishing-well Itachi. It'll hurt everybody, in different ways.
As for Naruto - I can't blame him for wanting to flee. He has his own experience and truth, of course. But to lose so much after you've almost got used to it.. Naruto's instincts must be killing him.
Would Sasuke's unspoken words have stopped the boy? No, I think. It'd have made the separation even more unbearable.
But he will be regretting not having said them.
What is Sasuke going to do?.. the wisest thing would be to report Naruto as missing, as he can't look for him everywhere himself and Naruto's well aware Sasuke knows his habits and preferences.
You've done a good job describing a non-win situation, a dead lock. I'm feeling so sad right now. The question is, what was their relationship's real worth? No matter how many words have been exchanged before, they'll start to realize it now, full force. What will this change for Naruto?.. I wonder.
Thank you for the chapter. i felt it was so right - naruto's change in behaviour and etc. So right.
person kit
schedule January 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
ah!!! he ran away
there was a feeling of dread leading up to that moment.
What were his words to Sasuke, I wonder?
I can't wait to read the next chapter
person qwerty
schedule January 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhh. Wasn't expecting that but now thinking about it, i totally should have. ahhh, please update soon!!
person Daga
schedule January 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I started reading to relax before sleep... It turned out to be a bad idea ;) You are really evil with this clif hanger. Thanks for weekly updates :)
person Chester
schedule January 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love this story!! Keep up the great work - I am on pins and needles all the time till you update!
person qwerty
schedule January 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
awwww. so cute!!
person Daga
schedule December 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT! I would like to be more specific but it would take too much writing... cause I like EVERYTHING about this story and each chapter deserves a positive comment. I think you are getting even better with time and last chapter proves it cause it was amazing. I can't wait to read next ones and hope there will be another 50! :) I usually don't prefer AU stories but you've made so brilliant work that I don't mind it at all. Thank you so much for sharing!
person Kryuuz
schedule December 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hana this chapter was amazing! Its been a while since I've read a story that makes me throw down my phone and walk off laughing making any observer confused when i return only to repeat this several times. XD
Im glad naru and sasu get to be open with each other without having to be all secretive. I just hope that this wasn't so lighthearted to compensate for misery in future chapters Dx

But ill take whatever you throw at us! Keep up the awesome and know im always checking for an update on this amazing story!
schedule December 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I've followed this story from the beginning and I can honestly say that I'm looking forward to a lot more chapters. With that said , you had stated you would go back to weekly updates after getting back from Istanbul, and I've yet to see that happen;) you've captured the characters beautifully as well as their hardships and happiness. I'm usually a silent reader, waiting until the story finishes to give input, but I just couldn't help myself, please see this story all the way through as so many authors here never do!(:
schedule December 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was superb. It actually brought tears to my eyes. It's not realistic to keep Naruto hidden, but now he and Sasuke has to part ways. It's sad. I also find it sweet how Naruto acts so brave despite that he's been crying. It's admirable of Itachi to promise to help Naruto. The whole chapter was very touching. Well done!