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December 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the chapter.
The way Itachi approached the situation is... very characteristic of him. He wants to help, make things right and do justice. And not to hurt their feelings, all combined. He does all the right things, but his tone, his choice of words, his approach... it's just too much. Unpleasant. Business-like. Calculating.
I'm glad itachi stopped himself asking if Sasuke loved the boy. Does itachi have any idea of what *this* kind of love is? It really seems not to be *his* place to ask or judge.
As for the rest, I just hope Naruto loves Sasuke just enough *not* to run away after the week's over. His escapish tendencies are justified with survival instincts. He may have full trust in sasuke 'cause he's *safe*, but the legal system and the police and etc?..
If Naruto stays till the end, it's wonderful progress for him as a person. Hope he will and some good 'god mother fairy' makes an appearance, Iruka or else...
The way Itachi approached the situation is... very characteristic of him. He wants to help, make things right and do justice. And not to hurt their feelings, all combined. He does all the right things, but his tone, his choice of words, his approach... it's just too much. Unpleasant. Business-like. Calculating.
I'm glad itachi stopped himself asking if Sasuke loved the boy. Does itachi have any idea of what *this* kind of love is? It really seems not to be *his* place to ask or judge.
As for the rest, I just hope Naruto loves Sasuke just enough *not* to run away after the week's over. His escapish tendencies are justified with survival instincts. He may have full trust in sasuke 'cause he's *safe*, but the legal system and the police and etc?..
If Naruto stays till the end, it's wonderful progress for him as a person. Hope he will and some good 'god mother fairy' makes an appearance, Iruka or else...
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November 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like all chapters with brothers' moments, but this is very special. Enjoyed every passage. From some routine but very intimate and touching moment with brothers to even more intimacy between lovers.
The life upstairs and downstairs - what a contrast! Sasuke's feelings, duties and desires, inner conflict, all out, burning. Top from the bottom :)
And this piece I really loved: "It was like the most succulent cut of fillet mignon had just been set in front of him, a viand with a presentation almost too perfect to mar by eating it"(c). Ummm. Yammi.. Is Naruto an artist?
Judging by the last line of the story, our dear Uchiha genius has had Naruto figured out for some time. I'm all waitnig for the explanation of his Uchiha-style uber-deductive method... what, he's been secretly climbing upstairs to watch his lil brother sleep?.. Or smelt something foreign on Sasuke or saw some things that shouldn't have been in the Uchiha household, like cheap sweets?..
I've expected that he was coming to some conclusions when talking to 'changed' Sasuke, and waited for a chance to confirm hem.. right?
As Naruto has to face him on his own, I expect the boy to simply admit everything, lamely finishing their long-term game by the time Sasuke comes racing downstairs. So the game *will* be over.
Yes, it's the easiest way to finish it all. Otherwise Sasuke would have to lie to Itachi, making himself looking pathetic in his brother's eyes.
I don't think Itachi's 'soft smile' means any good news for the guys. The situation will change, it's high time it changed. Naruto will have to leave, sooner or later. And I want to see itachi communicating with Naruto - the boy's so different from them two, like an alien. Will Itachi see Naruto for what he really is, his true worth? He should. What'd he say?..
So, till the next chapter! Thank you so much, will reread it again!
The life upstairs and downstairs - what a contrast! Sasuke's feelings, duties and desires, inner conflict, all out, burning. Top from the bottom :)
And this piece I really loved: "It was like the most succulent cut of fillet mignon had just been set in front of him, a viand with a presentation almost too perfect to mar by eating it"(c). Ummm. Yammi.. Is Naruto an artist?
Judging by the last line of the story, our dear Uchiha genius has had Naruto figured out for some time. I'm all waitnig for the explanation of his Uchiha-style uber-deductive method... what, he's been secretly climbing upstairs to watch his lil brother sleep?.. Or smelt something foreign on Sasuke or saw some things that shouldn't have been in the Uchiha household, like cheap sweets?..
I've expected that he was coming to some conclusions when talking to 'changed' Sasuke, and waited for a chance to confirm hem.. right?
As Naruto has to face him on his own, I expect the boy to simply admit everything, lamely finishing their long-term game by the time Sasuke comes racing downstairs. So the game *will* be over.
Yes, it's the easiest way to finish it all. Otherwise Sasuke would have to lie to Itachi, making himself looking pathetic in his brother's eyes.
I don't think Itachi's 'soft smile' means any good news for the guys. The situation will change, it's high time it changed. Naruto will have to leave, sooner or later. And I want to see itachi communicating with Naruto - the boy's so different from them two, like an alien. Will Itachi see Naruto for what he really is, his true worth? He should. What'd he say?..
So, till the next chapter! Thank you so much, will reread it again!
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November 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awash omgomgomgomg my heart just stopped xD judging from the" soft smile" i guess itachi isn't upset....hopefully...but how the he'll did he get downstairs? 0.o and does this mean he knows what his bro and naru have been up to? XD must've been akward...let's see itachi find a legal way to keep sash and naru together....brotherly love do your thing! XD
Keep on being awesome!
Keep on being awesome!
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November 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It's wonderful. I had a lot of fun reading it.
I like how you don't rush through the story rather develop it slowly with complex and interesting sub-plots, and actualizing the characters and their relationships in difficult situations. It's very different from other stories set in current times. Every chapter always leaves me with intrigue.
Looking forward to the next chapters,
KN.
I like how you don't rush through the story rather develop it slowly with complex and interesting sub-plots, and actualizing the characters and their relationships in difficult situations. It's very different from other stories set in current times. Every chapter always leaves me with intrigue.
Looking forward to the next chapters,
KN.
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November 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
D8> seriously, you left me gaping in surprise!
I was not expecting itachi to catch naruto in this chapter. Ahg! I can't wait to read the next chapter!! so many questions....how did he know? how'd he get downstairs? what will itachi do?
I was not expecting itachi to catch naruto in this chapter. Ahg! I can't wait to read the next chapter!! so many questions....how did he know? how'd he get downstairs? what will itachi do?
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November 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that last scene almost gave me heart-attack. It all seemed so casual and suddenly Itachi is there. Nice cliffhanger! His comment leads me to believe he's known about Naruto for a while. He's smiling softly so he doesn't seem too upset. Itachi doesn't seem like a person who would throw Naruto out anyway. He's more likely to help out. Naruto helped pitch in financially and he changed Sasuke for the better, so that should mean something. I'm sitting on pins and needles now. I can't wait to know what happens next.
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November 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! When Itachi saw him I was like fuckfuckfuckfuckfuckwe'redead. Ha! I love this so much. please update soon. I can't wait!!
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November 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
oh shitttt. it finally happened!!
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November 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I loved Aiko. She made me smile and laugh with her vivid personality. I'm also glad that Itachi is able to come home again. He's been trough a lot. The plot thickens though. I'm worried about what will happen to Naruto. He's lived a tough life so he deserves something good to happen to him. I'm keeping my fingers crossed that things will end well for everyone. ^_^
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November 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing. I love how realistic it is but wonderful things happen amongst the bad. I hope things will turn out well for the two. Keep up the wonderful work!