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Can't wait for more^^I'm just suggesting...If there were to have a sex scene..I do hope that Naruto is the uke...I prefer Naruto to be an uke^^he's cute XD

Yeah, thanky lots! This was such a nice long chappie. We finally know the truth, I had a feeling that little girl was Sasuke's unborn sister.

I wasn't particularly interested in the fic after the first chapter, but as things got more mysterious, I got more interested. Naruto being a ghost (I'm assuming) gives the story a fresh take on the stale high school fic plot. I'm assuming there's a reason why Sasuke can see Naruto when others can't? (Again I'm assuming that they can't based on Naruto's surprise at Sasuke seeing him in the first chapter.) And the two little girls at the end, rather than one of them being Sasuke's little sister, were they perhaps Mikoto and Kushina? Since Sasuke is a lonely person, having Naruto suddenly show up in his life is a good thing for him because it gives him a connection to another person, but of course the problem with that is Naruto isn't exactly normal. I wonder how Sasuke will take it when he finds out?

I'll keep an eye out for the next chapter. BTW, I don't mind that you aren't planning on making this into an epic fic. Long fics have a tendency to lose all plot coherency by the end, so a short fic with an actual plot is way better, IMHO.

Plz don't tell me that naruto died...plz plz plz....plz plz plz plz...hahah...I should focus on sasuke...but I can't help the feeling that naruto is hiding something as well....just don't make naruto dia....plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

This chappie has a strange but good feeling about it. Like there's something alot more going on here. I can't wait to read the next chappie :D!

update soon! :D
nice one in here..

I wonder if Naruto will get to be solid?

Naruto really is asmiling, idiotic weirdo; Sasuke's moody and gloomy as ever.. what new would you make of a typical high school story, I wonder..
Don't make the story so simplistic - it should kinda 'unravel', step by step; show characters through actions and little details, don't give character sketches yourself all the time, in plain words - it leaves nothing to imagination and sorta pins the reader down. So, you've summed it all up in the very first chapter - what next?
I was intrigued by the words "Remember me" in the title - it's itnresting. And the ending was quite nice. Naruto's presence brings in Sasuke's soul loneliness - it's beautiful.

I like it so far. Can't wait for more :)!