rate_review Reviews

I absolutely love it!! your word choice was magnificent, your descriptions were incomparable, the story, though short, made it seems as if it had a billion chapters. over all i just love it. Bravo, bravo.

This left me breathless. It was actually my first time taking in a bdsm NaruSasu, and it amazed me I literally wanted to scream. No wonder you won the contest. It is so full, I don't even have enough words to express how VIVID everything was. And it wasn't just some stupid game or play, nor was it completely sadistic, but beautiful in its own way. Their bond, their love, their complete trust, everything sums it up so well, and the small backstory gave the best effect possible. The cliffhanger was great, I rarely say that, but it is also very predictable what Naruto is about to do, and I love it. I'd love to see more about this story, although you wrapped it up very nicely. For this part of the story, you did a great job, from start to end, nothing's out of place, nothing's missing. Only little problem for me was seeing Shikamaru as a sub, since I wasn't expecting it, but I got used to it fast, and Temari does sound like that type of girl. Shika is too lazy to be a dom. And I ADORED how you explained their relationship at the end, the furry baby part left me grinning. All in all, it was wonderful reading this. Kudos for you.

Not quite sure weather to bow down to your genius or slap you for the cliffhanger... I'll settle for applause *claps* Well written and somehow in character (even if I generally like Naru on the bottom, this was just as likely, so congrats) and very detailed. I suggest an epilogue because I know authors who have pitch forks and torch's for cliffhangers, but it obviously isn't necessary.

I'd love to see the backstory to this. I think you capture the scene very well.