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December 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM
😫😫😫😌😌😌....THAT WAS A TEASE...PLEASE TELL NR U R UPDATING ON THIS STORY....I REALLY WANT THIS STORY TO CONTINUE.....
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May 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM
really love this awesome story cant wait for brand new chapters
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October 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You have some amazing story ideas and writings but I feel you should concentrate on one of them instead of starting 10 amazing stories at once and making loyal reasers( I.e. me) waiting in suspense for the next chapter.
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October 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just hope it's not one more of thousands of Naruto's-topping'em-all! stories... authors usually *a bit* overdo and overkill, and our lil' lovable Naruto ends up as some parody of some sex-machine or a perverted monster. Most powerful, sexiest of all ninjas alive. Don't forget of what makes Naruto a real hero and champion - nothing has been for free for him in his entire life. And now... everyone wants him. It's just too un-real and simplistic. You won't prove anything by it.
A loving, caring and tender demon Kyuubi? One more overkill, in my opinion. it needs proper explanation. Where has all hatred has gone? With only sex left in its place, I guess..:)
A loving, caring and tender demon Kyuubi? One more overkill, in my opinion. it needs proper explanation. Where has all hatred has gone? With only sex left in its place, I guess..:)