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for Underneath the Underneath

by Raiethstar

person Skyrere
schedule December 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
awesome. I loved it. Well done. :D
He sure can be creepy.
person KanekoAmaterasu
schedule November 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Your writing style is extremely riveting. This is an amazing story :).
person mabidiso
schedule November 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant and vastly disturbing. This is a troubling exploration and I can't take my eyes off of it. This version of Kakashi makes him an astounding actor, able to emulate emotions and expressions that carefully manipulate those around him. Unless by the time he becomes a Jounin sensei and has his own team of genin, he actually has learned to become more human. I loved how you wrote his reaction to his father's suicide.