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April 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Update fast please ! I'm really like this story . it make my day
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November 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Okay dear glow-in-the-dark, where to start? Truly, writing rather than mutilating yourself or someone else is a lot healthier and satisfying choice! The same goes for all of you knife-loving fools ;)
I'm really curious of what had happened to Iruka. Or more precisely, what had Kakashi done to Iruka. You have written the emotion, the oppressive ambiance so that I could actually feel it. Great job! I hope something happens to change the situation between the two of them, and soon. I sort of didn't like how soon and easily Kakashi started to cry... I understand that all that happened was very painful for him, more so psychologically, perhaps tears glittering in his eyes, but to all out cry... Anyway, not a big deal and it didn't spoil anything for me, so don't be worried ^.^
Did I miss something? For a while I wasn't sure who Kakashi was cutting; himself or Iruka? Then it was clear, but I'm not sure why they both were ecstatic about it.
I loved Iruka in control. I loved the torturing speech in front of the mirror and how that scene played out with Kakashi slashing out and breaking the chair. That was really great! Kakashi measuring over eight inches, wow! My sympathies lie definitely with the copy-nin. One can hold on to hatred and bitterness only for so long before losing sympathies; no matter how wronged they have been.
All and all, I very much enjoyed the read. I'm looking forward to see how things play out and I hope you don't take too long to update and I really, really hope you'll finish the story (I don't usually read WIP fics, since I hate it if they're never finished)! Thank you for sharing!
I'm really curious of what had happened to Iruka. Or more precisely, what had Kakashi done to Iruka. You have written the emotion, the oppressive ambiance so that I could actually feel it. Great job! I hope something happens to change the situation between the two of them, and soon. I sort of didn't like how soon and easily Kakashi started to cry... I understand that all that happened was very painful for him, more so psychologically, perhaps tears glittering in his eyes, but to all out cry... Anyway, not a big deal and it didn't spoil anything for me, so don't be worried ^.^
Did I miss something? For a while I wasn't sure who Kakashi was cutting; himself or Iruka? Then it was clear, but I'm not sure why they both were ecstatic about it.
I loved Iruka in control. I loved the torturing speech in front of the mirror and how that scene played out with Kakashi slashing out and breaking the chair. That was really great! Kakashi measuring over eight inches, wow! My sympathies lie definitely with the copy-nin. One can hold on to hatred and bitterness only for so long before losing sympathies; no matter how wronged they have been.
All and all, I very much enjoyed the read. I'm looking forward to see how things play out and I hope you don't take too long to update and I really, really hope you'll finish the story (I don't usually read WIP fics, since I hate it if they're never finished)! Thank you for sharing!
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October 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What happened to Iruka I want to know.