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for Another Perfect Wonder

by jaded_priceless

schedule March 23, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I know this took me a while to get to but WOW!!! Been super busy but slowly getting through the chapters and loving them. I love the detail you put into each chapter.  I have laughed and cried throughout this whole story and found myself at the edge of my seat. The details about missions and each rank of ninja is amazing. I really look forward to your next chapter. I’m sad I’ve already caught up and now I have to wait but no rush. Keep up the great work with such amazing details.

 

keep it spicy 

person Dark-ekin
schedule November 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Love it! Waiting the next chapter!,,

person -Sessha Batto
schedule September 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Just read all 51 chapters without a break! I adore the slow build and insights into the men behind the characters we think we know. Waiting impatiently to see where this goes, however long that takes!

person baelfyre
schedule May 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Iruka has such a strong yet gentle personality. I love it... cant wait for the next chapter...
person Emily maxwell
schedule February 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter I always love vet the effort you put in the details as always I love how iruka deals with kakashi
person Eiennoren
schedule January 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Omg!!! You are still writing this!!!! Thank youuuuu!!!! I am so happy!!! Loved this story so hard!! Yay!
person Sessha Batto
schedule December 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I just reread this entire fic and now I am on tenterhooks...I cannot wait to see where it goes!!
person anon
schedule July 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Excellent writing, not too many editing mistakes, a glimpse at the Naruto verse that seems more whole and complete than just the cool jutsus and wham bam missions- though I love those too. Loved the accuracy in some of the color dying techniques. Loved the sensitivity and practicality mixed together, and the glimpses into the summon animals' world. The letters to mother were fun- trying to understand them before you revealed them and seeing how close I got to figureing out what was meant. Also found it very healing in many ways. The title is incredible accurate, I think. Thank you for sharing.

schedule July 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow! As always amazing!! You have me hooked on this story!! Poor Kakashi! I love the emotion you put into the characters and make Kakashi seem like a normal human being even though he's an anbu I love it
person weatherwax
schedule July 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Waiting patiently for more chapters *bites nails*