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for Another Perfect Wonder

by jaded_priceless

schedule November 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
"Smells like Pakkun!" Ha! I don't mind the short length as long as you keep them coming so quickly! I do love this story.
schedule November 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
HA! "Did you mount him?" That was fantastic. And then they had to make sure. I'm wondering when that might happen and I'm curious now who the Seme will be. ^_^
person chevenga
schedule November 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is utterly delightful so far. I wish I was talented enough to make you fan-art of Iruka doing his crazy civilian ritual in the forest while the "ninjas" laughed. I'm glad that Iruka has finally met up with Kakashi, and I look forward to more. I don't commnent much, but please know that I'm reading every chapter enthusiastically. Thanks very much for sharing the story!
schedule November 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay, quick update! More.
schedule November 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think my heart did the same thing Kakashi's did when we both thought Pakkun had been captured and stabbed! Continue!
schedule October 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I'm enjoying this story a lot! Please continue soon!