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for Another Perfect Wonder

by jaded_priceless

person Saki
schedule March 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for a wonderful story. I only found it the other day and have already read all of it that you have written. I hope the next chapter comes out soon.
By the way your detail in each chapter is amazing. Please continue...
schedule March 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Sorry it has been a while since I have been able to review. The story I find has been very good! Your details are great, I love how you took your time to describe even the smallest thing has left me wanting more. The long chapters are real nice as well. Erotic as well haha as always, keep up the great writing and I'll rev again when I can
schedule February 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So things have gone strange so I can't remember where I had left off but your story is AMAZING!! I love how you put so much detail into your story! Each chapter is nice and long with such detail that as I read, I can' see it in my mind. I LOVE your story!!
person Kim G
schedule February 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I've been away so long. And come back to this! Oh, happy me. ^_^
person wikedsinn
schedule January 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
YAY for Updates!
person Daga
schedule January 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It's getting so hot I can hardly breathe ;) Can't wait for next chapters!
schedule November 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So far I have immensely enjoyed your story. Sorry I haven't given each chapter a revie, but I have been dying to get to the next chapter. Your deep details and descriptions are amazing. From the way Ruka trikes to deceive the other ninja to what is happening with Kakashi, you have been keeping me at the edge of my seat. Please continue with the great writing!!!!
person project mjolnir
schedule November 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Your story is good so far. I have been enjoying it and look forward to reading the next chapter keep up the good work
schedule November 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Another really good chapter!
schedule November 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Poor ruka!! I have been really enjoying your story!!