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for Another Perfect Wonder

by jaded_priceless

person Efram
schedule November 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love it!
person Weatherwax
schedule October 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yay new chapter!
😍
Poor Kakashi, I can see him getting angry at himself for not being able to control his fears even after having the genjutsu work.
person Kim G
schedule September 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Life's been crazy, and I've fallen behind on so many things. What joy to come back to this story. To take a break from all the IRL demands and live in this world for a little while is a real treat. Loving this! Thank you so much for continuing their tale. :)
schedule September 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! But that last bit was very very confusing. I love Kakashi so much.
person Weatherwax
schedule September 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaaaaaaaay new chapter! :D Love the way you deal with Kakashi's trauma, some people might think it's too slow for him to recover but in real life that kind of trauma is the worst to recover from. Good job!
person Kim G
schedule June 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
“THIS.IS.NOT.A.FISH.STICK!”

LOLOLOLOLOL!!!

So, okay, I squealed a little when I saw a new chapter. And then came a happy dance. Yay!!! :-D
schedule June 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So glad to see an update! So many little things being revealed! The ending felt really sudden. As much as I don't want this story to end, I want another update soon.
person Weatherwax
schedule June 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I was really afraid the story would be abandoned, it's the best written of this couple I've read so far :D
person Chloe
schedule June 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful tale! I cannot wait for the next update. :) I really like the comical bits. Brings a bit of lightness to everything else going on. I am excited to learn more abo.ut Iruka's maternal family history.
person Weatherwax
schedule June 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh come on, please PLEASE continue your story? Pretty please?