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for Love Me

by TruelyWritten

person LovelessUchiha
schedule November 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You are doing great. Update please! I think Shino should realize it soon. You should start the next chapter with what Shino dreamed about. I can see him dreaming about Kibe and the next day normal everyday brushes of arms and casual things Kiba does start to drive him nuts until he breaks and kisses Kiba. Wow, I got carried away playing that in my head lol. I can't wait to read the rest!
person LovelessUchiha
schedule November 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Damn. I just realized its been awhile since you updated. I really hope you finish. I liked it a lot so far..
person sris
schedule November 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, congrats for posting your first Naruto and first yaoi chapter! I like your writing style and I like where the story is heading. It's also an interesting pairing and there are many intriguing stuff one could play with. I'm waiting to see how it works out between the two. Thanks for sharing!