rate_review Reviews

I really loved the whole story so far. Great Job. Cant wait to LOL at the other scenarios you have cooked up for Naruto. And that BS about Naruto not being ready to receive the key...yeah. Jeraiya, you are a twat. Naruto doesn't have to fight Kyu-chan...urm. It feels kinda strange to refer to Kurama by such a name. Yeah, anyway. I enjoyed this. Looking forward to some more in the 'not too distant future' I hope.

That Omake was BOSS!!!! Thanks for this great Lemon Story, btw!

I really love this series. Please Keep it up. I'm looking forward to next chapter

I simply love the story, but one thing that I've noticed and am kind of annoyed with is that in the oral sex department Naruto has only been on the receiving end of things. I understand that with him getting it, it can help to show dominance over the various girls, but if he was to give it then it would help to show how much he cares for the girls in question. This had never really bothered me as much before until reading chapter 19, where it mentions that both Fuu's and Nanabi's pussy juices have a particularly sweet scent, which begs the question do they also have a sweeter taste as well? But since the story seems to focus more on the mans pleasure/dominance it seems that we may never find out.

In chapter six, toward the end, when Naruto is in the level up/review process you called him having sex with 3 women in 24 hours the bronze hat trick instead of silver. Also, is there some way that I can send you corrections of errors en masse if I get motivated enough to?

Nice chapter update soon wow 2 chapters in just a few days nice im glad fuu is out of that town and cant wait to see who comes next

Nice work as always, looking forward to the next chapter already. Who will be next, I wonder? Isaribi? Guren? Mei Terumi? Update soon, I wanna find out!

Another awesome chapter and so soon after the last one. Love that he rescued Fuu and the Nanabi. I am wondering though why Nanabi didn't give him her true name to further show her loyalty. And the mutations to both Fire and Earth were awesome. But I so would have picked Titan of defense, yet Golem of defense suits him perfectly so I understood taking that.

The Fire mutation though sounded a like Scorch Release.And turning the Sage female as well ... makes me think somethings being set up for down the road. Looking forward to the next chapter. Shame the Fuma didn't join Konoha.

well, I do like all the perks he can get. Their unique and you don't really expect them to exist. I am interested in the true susanoo perk though (i love the jutsu, it's my favorite)

Rather quick on the update. So now Naruto has Fuu and Nanabi. That leaves Yugito and Nibi, Sanbi, Yonbi, Gobi, Rokubi, and hachibi for him to find. And adding in Kyuubi, all of them to unseal and have sex with.

Overall, awesome work. Keep it up!