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Honestly one of the best lemon stories EVER, especially since I love the video game concept. Can't wait for a new chapter(especially of one features Mei Terumi the Godaime Mizukage, honestly one of the hottest anime girls ever)

why is there not a game like this also really well done and can not wait for the next part.

FREAKIN AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!

I hope you update more

Just wanted to know if you knew someone using the name Upstream River has uploaded what is essentially an exact copy of your chapter one, of this story, using the exact same tile on Fanfiction.net

I have to wonder, what are you going to do about Naruto's travels with Jiraiya? Is it just going to be a time skip, or are you planning on having him meet other women?

this is my all time favorite story man tips for the next girls: Guren, the cristal user Konan, the paper mistres of the akatsuki Yuago Uzuki, neko mask anbu the late hyatye gekos fiance, Pakura the scortch style user from sand, Maubi, Saumi, Yugito, or the red head [forgot her name] from kumo, Shion the preistess, hell even the Jubbi[ten tails] or girls from other shows, like benders from avatar, or maka from soul eater

you should do an ark with 3 girls that are kami, yami, and shinigami, or even better Mito and Kushina Uzumaki, i meen if he got a perk for gang banging Mikoto he should get at least like 7k points

Uh, did I miss the bit where sasuke got the curse seal? He didn't get it in the chunin exams that I saw in your fic. And naruto has had at least 2 A-ranks, counting koyuki's mission.

Also a bit annoying is it gets kinda choppy in parts. I know it's mostly for the lemons, but you included something of a storyline. But you left tsunade's reaction to her de-aging and maybe getting mokuton out totally, and how much younger she is now.

We can assume naruto still has fun with the various konoha residents offscreen. But anko at least I'd think might get a revisit with naruto's apparent ability to take out the curse seal. Did kurenai ever come back for some live action? Did ino actually keep up the real training/diet?

I'm not complaining too much really, just think the fic'd be better with a few less holes/huge time skips. Because I find myself liking the changes to canon, though there aren't near enough (like surely shika wasn't the only one promoted? Surely this naruto deserved to be chunin also?) as well as the lemons.

I like your storry, can't wait for the next chapter.
There is one thing in the last chapter that doesn't add up however...

Seventy-two points left, Naruto skimmed through the skills and spotted one. It wasn’t one for him, but rather for the girls. Naruto poured eighty points into it.

How can he pour 80 points into massage with only 72 points left?

thanks for putting so many updates out so quickly. it really made my day. I would follow this story, or whatever it is you do to get info on when u have updated a new chapter, but I don't know shit about how to work this site.