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I'll amdit, I'm confused. tayuya was mentioned right at the beginning of the chapter, but then nothing else in the chapter. did she die? how does Naruto know her name?

I'm jsut....really lost and confused, considering you jumped over a whole lot in this chapter. What on earth happened between after he dealt with Kurenai in the last chapter, and waht happene din this chapter? An explanation would be very nice, either in story, or via e-mail or PM on my FF account.

Anyways, other then my utter confusion on what happened, this was a really great fight chapter. but like I said, totally lsot and would love an explanation.

Awesome story. Just finished reading what you have written so far and have to say I am loving it. Can't wait to see what comes next.

Are you finished with the story or the chapter? If the chapter, hurry up with the next one! I want to know what happened to sasuke!

Nice! Love it! Naruto dominated Sasuke. Now for some love from his lovers. LOL!

Nice work, man. Seriously. I like how you abused Tsukiyomi, and updated your book thing. Now, who is next on the agenda?

wow this is a great story I really like these rpg-style games could you please email me when you update this I'm not sure if this site would do it automatically. Anyway please continue to write such awesome work and great characterization.

I think there might be a chapter missing, we jumped from Naruto running to Tsunade about the possible 30 year age decrease to a confrontation with Doto...

Nice, thanks for the update.

wow absolutly loving this adultfanfic continue

Nice chapter, though I would have liked to see a bit more of the Tsukiyomi sex scenes and how far Kurenai broke in them.