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by HunterBerserkerWolf

person CodeRR
schedule March 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nice additions to the game, I approve
person Leaf Ranger
schedule March 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well I hope maybe next chapter you can do a flashback of the Naruto/Hinata date. But I'm assuming they didn't have sex, yes? ^.^;

OVerall though, great chapter. Very nice. and the new additions are pretty sweet too. *nods* Keep it up!
person Anon
schedule March 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
YEAAAHHHHH!!!!!!!!! You're bsck!!!!!

Aside that, good chapter, I love it!

Also, what don't put medals about the bust size. For example: Bazoongas!! You have sex with 3 women that have Big Breast.

And sorry if my english it's not good, because it's not my language.
person Wyrtha
schedule March 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love this story and the hot lemons. Looking forward to see how Naruto goes forward. Does he give in to the desire for more power/abilities plus Kyubi's urgings and start sport fucking targeting any and all females in Konoha or on missions. Or will he go the harder route ... or just keep doing what he's doing.

Looking forward to see if you use any/many of the extra anime episode females. Shizuka and her attendant/Yakumo/Haruna/Hokuto/Natsuhi/Isaribi/Toki/Suzumebachi/Tsubaki/Kagero/Sasame are ones that come to mind. Toki and Haruna would go to the ladies of influence since they are Daimyo's and possibly virgins. Sasame, Isaribi, Yakumo, and Hokuto are definite virgins though Isaribi could have an even darker hidden past. Natsuhi's a pure milf of the highest order.

Just some thoughts. Look forward to your next chapter regardless. Of course you could just do the skip and when Naruto returns and makes his next conquest the scroll can reveal all of those different conquests plus extra from during the trip to show his new abilities, skills, etc.
person VFSNAKE
schedule March 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nice! He got Koyuki and taught Kurenai a lesson. Sweeeet! Can't wait to see who he bangs next.
person Guest
schedule March 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
And nothing of value was lost; I don't like Hinata.

But great, thanks for the update! This was a very nice surprise, I though you had dropped the fic which made it all the better.
schedule March 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved how you're going to have Naruto basically have a village full of women just for him. I can't wait to see who is next there's Koyuki who could be next, Kurenai, Tenten, Hinata because of the rice balls and the medical cream (he also suggested that they go get something to eat once he is back), or you could do ones that you've all ready done like Anko with Kurenai, Kin with Temari were Temari isn't in control, or maybe even get where Naruto has to be submissive to Anko and he flips it around and get Anko to Join his Harem. I know that Kyuubi is going to be later on Down the road but when Naruto does get Kyuubi you could have Naruto get the Silver Marathon Man or did he already get that with Kin, Tayuya, and Karin I don't know it didn't say at the end of the chapter. Great work could use the suggestions that I've said or not doesn't matter to me if you do but make them enjoyable to read like you've been doing so far and thanks for reporting it and adding more chapters.
person Caesar808
schedule February 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you are continuing this one. Took awhile to find it. Update soon
person Ricky12440
schedule February 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that I finally found this fic again. I was reading this on yourfanfiction, and when that site went down I couldn't remember what the name of this fic was. I finally found it today, and I'm glad that you chose to post it somewhere else instead of stopping or giving up out of frustration, which many authors have done. I love this fic and I can't wait for you to update it.
person Wrathkal
schedule February 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
There aren't that many S-ranked kunoichis around, are there? Mei is the only other one I can think of, and maybe Yugito.

More domination please!