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by HunterBerserkerWolf

person Syxx
schedule December 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
5 Stars for the Tsunade chapter. LOVE the Naruto/Tsunade pairing. Going to take a guess and say that Naruto and Tsunade are going to go at it again, this time with Tsunade being younger, that way Naruto unlocks Tsunade's full unlocks. Hope to see more soon.
person VFSNAKE
schedule December 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Naruto banged Tsunade. Can't wait till he screws more women.
schedule December 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
A great story, hot and sexy but with a plot under the sex too! A small suggestion: there's a website called Archive Of Our Own which does support E-mail alerts (which I haven't found on AFF), pervy stories (like yours) and includes Naruto stories, Harry Potter stories, and a few others I haven't explored fully.
person Takai153
schedule December 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. It's got humor, action, and lemons; the three kind of stories that I like all rolled into one! Itachi's threat to Naruto about his mom and Naruto's prank on Jiraiya were hilarious. Kyuubi was great too. I like how you've portrayed her personality, and I got one word for her description: YAWZA! (I especially like the beauty mark) I'm looking forward to seeing how the rasen-shuriken will go in the fight against Kabuto and Orochimaru, and what else Naruto is going to unleash on them.

You did a great job on Shizune's lemon! I can't wait to see how Tsunade will go down, especially since this earned him the Danger-Close medal. I'm also looking forward to seeing how his date with Hinata will go. And I imagine that Naruto asking the Yamanaka for help about his mindscape will lead to Ino, and that should be fun. Or maybe Ino's mom or another mother/daughter combo.

Keep up the awesome work and please update as soon as you can!
schedule December 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good to see this story back, it's one of the few that I keep checking regularly for updates. As always, I love the way you keep track of the different stats and change some of the story details while keeping the plot coherent. Can't wait for the next chapter and the others that will hopefully follow.
person Jester
schedule December 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
EPIC and full of new ideas godd job
schedule December 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
you posted the same chapter twice both eight and nine are the same
schedule November 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter. Maybe the Akatsuki will send Konan to investigate about Naruto's Rinnegan in the next chapter? Or will Tsunade get some?
And speaking of the next chapter, I hope to read it soon.
person DrkVrtx
schedule November 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I wonder, did this get removed or did you take it down yourself? Regardless, glad to see it back up, definitely one of my favourite fics on this site thus far. Interested to see where you take things from here.
person Anon
schedule November 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just to let you know, you have chapter "Temari" up twice. Looking forward to the real chapter 13.