rate_review Reviews

Great new chapter to the story. Like that Jiraiya is not infallible and can mess up royally just like anyone else.

So did he learn Sage Mode or not? The last part with the note was a bit confusing.

YOU ARE BACK..... dam this made my day i thought this story was going to be forgotten cant wait to see what naruto does and how hard his 1st invasion goes

Yo,

nice chapter.

I have send you a PM on fanfiction.net so please answer that.

F*** your alive! I honestly thought you were dead. And I was honestly considering taking up the story in your absence and I've never written anything! Don't take such a long hiatus again, I love your story and I wanna see more of it or well whatever you do for part two since this one is basically over but that's not the point, the point is don't disappear like that again! Really I'm probably not the only one who loves the story but I'm probably one of the only ones who actually remember that before actually seeing that post on adult fanfiction. Really come on!

first chapter was good. not too detailed and the porn was good enuf for me to want to read more.

Nooooooooo! Fuck! Its not finished. Keeping my fingers crossed?

Awesome Chapters

This is a well-written story and I sincerely hope you begin updating again soon but understand if this isn't continued. Perhaps there will be an update if you'll be discontinuing this story? Story aside, seeing as there hasn't been a chapter update in several months I do hope things are going well for you and your pack.

so far a great story...I wish the skill descriptions didn't take as much room of the chapter...perhaps maybe an updated chapter of just upgrades/level ups every few chapters