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for The lemon games

by HunterBerserkerWolf

person Fawkes
schedule May 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
More please! The story is really good.
person Anon
schedule May 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hey, a piece of trash by the name of phoniexmist on ff.net is stealing your story. He's been stealing each chapters and posting them under his name and taking credit for it as well.
person ohohoho
schedule May 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I saw this at ff.net, is it a bad thing or is it also you? (bec it is just up to ch 13 there)
person nope
schedule April 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 20:
Hmmmm, getting a bit ahead of yourself, ne?
Especially since some virgins can suck better cock than pro's here, ne?
Even if they've never seen cock in all of their short live, ne?
Wonder why Chuck Norris was crossed out, ne?
person donalgraeme
schedule April 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Still to be done: an orgy, Yakumo,Naruko (may need to be under influence), kunoichi from Kumo and Kiri, crossovers if the 'game' expands, and of course OCs.Now get those creative juices (among other kinds) flowing!
person Keller
schedule March 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great stuff, good lemons and two hot pieces of ass to add to the collection although no word on what he got for those two women exp wise. Can't wait for more, hope you update again soon! :D
person cecil
schedule March 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
glad this is getting updated again. i was wondering if me and some friends could use your skill and perk idea for a naruto rpg we are trying to make.
person Leaf Ranger
schedule March 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OVerall, very awesome. Good lemons, but what was with the game crash at the beginning of the chapter? Seemed...well kind of out of place. ^.^;

Still, awesome work overall. And ohhh, unless Naruto didn't sleep with Isaribi, we need to see the stats he got form sleeping with her. DOn't forget that.

Keep it up!
schedule March 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Boy, Naruto was really dense in the latest chapter. Tsunade's thinking is that sometimes heading in head first is not the best strategy. Sometimes, flanking an enemy is not the best strategy as well. Etc. for the third strategy.
You always try to have teams made up that can do nearly everything in a pinch because you never know who/what you are goingg to be faced with, even with the best intelligence.
person Leaf Ranger
schedule March 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Overall, a nice chapter, but awww, no lemons? I mean, Naruto had three different chances for lemons in this fanfic. TT-TT