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So Naruto survived the battle using three paths. He just needs three more to match Nagato. It would be cool if he could possibly make his mom one, though that would also be disturbing as well.

Overall though, awesome work. Very awesome indeed. Glad to see he got Haku, even if it was yuri style.

Awesome, glad to see a new chapter of this story. It's the best of it's genre by far. Wow, what a surprise at the end. Akatsuki making another move like that. I can't wait to see how Naruto survives this one ... or if he does, and if he does if he did get anything for banging Suzumebachi. Of course also looking forward to seeing who is next on the hit list. Great job.

You know this has seemed like a pretty light hearted story so far. The end of this chapter was a really good cliffhanger. I would love to see a somewhat drawn out battle. Thanks for the chapter.

Oh wow. Was not expecting that. Was half expecting a lemon with Hinata (seriously, give us a Hinata lemon already. Please?). And wasn't expecting the Iwa chick. and certainly wasn't expecting the four Akatsuki members.

Overall though, awesome chapter. Keep it up!

I don't have an account here but having been following hmthis fic since it first started on FF before that stupid purge removed it. I just felt it should ne said that I REALLY hate you now for that EVIL cliffhanger. Hopefully you update soon so I'm not left in supense for to long. If you wish for any form of help PM me at FF my guest tag is my Real Account there.

So I was wondering if you might be able to release more chapters because this fic is one of my favs and I cannot wait for you to write more. I know it is very time consuming butI would really like to read this fully.
Thanks Reithra

Man this is a great chapter! I can't wait for the Kyuubi to realize that all he needs is to have sex with one bijuu to get the demon knight form. Also he only needs to bring his divine chakra and chakra control up and he'll have that as well!


One thing though, when will Naruto finally go on the timeskip, because the only way he'll encounter any more bijuu if he goes es through it the canon way is when he meets bii during the war and that would take too long for the Kyuubi I believe; so why doesn't he meet and free the other bijuu during the training trip.

Example: he finds a cave the akatsuki was using to extract bijuu chakra but they couldn't extract its soul,so he gices it enough chakra to healand she becomes indebted to him and starts following him.

http://stories.xnxx.com/story/55161/Naruto%3AThe_lemon_games_chapter_1%3ATsuname
it's a copy of this one on another site, don't know if it's you yourself who's uploading it, if so then no problem but if it isn't then i would go and report the author on that site.

Mmmmh, this fic is one of the best fics with sex scenes I ever read, you did a great job! :)

However, I have a question:

Mei Terumi will be in this story too?

Naruto "did it" with the Ichibi? That was an answome idea! Naruto will f*** every Bijuus?