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for The Heart Of The Matter

by Daydreamer79

schedule March 20, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Simply beautiful.

person lara5170
schedule October 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This was both a sad and encouraging story, but I wish it was longer because I can't help wondering if it worked out or not.
person dru_neko
schedule April 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
mew would purrrfer chu write out the story with more ups and downs as is all relationships and let the smexy time naturally come in.
schedule January 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i'm glad they didn't rush to smut. it have felt... rushed or wrong sort of. give them time to get comfy with each other.
anywho, well done.
person satterb
schedule January 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I think it ended perfectly. You would have had to skip a lot, or prolong the story to make it believable that Naruto would hook up with them both. LOL. But I'm not against the idea of a sequel. Hint, Hint. Thanks for all your hard work on this one. I loved it!
schedule January 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really loved your story. I was beautifully written. I was hesitant on reading it at first because I have never been one for sad stories, but I'm really glad I chose to read it. As for the lack of smut, you were right to leave it out. (but a little sequel later would be good.) Thank you for posting your story. :)
person nekotsue
schedule January 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love how you wrote this story capturing all that survivors go through very well and the ending is perfect.
I would love for you to write an epilogue it'd be fun to see what's happened to them down the road a ways.
A truly touching and encouraging story it leaves hope that healing really does come.
thanks.
person Bree
schedule January 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was a beautiful read. Thank you.
person Chrissy
schedule January 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Aw, it's ended already. I was hoping to read more Kisame and Naruto interaction. Not necessarily the sex, though that part is definitely nice too. But this is pretty much the first story with Kisame paired up with Naruto that i actually really, really like and is interested in. Naruto with either Sasuke or Itachi are my top favorite couples, so imagine my surprise when i actually looked forward to reading a story with Naruto and Kisame. I believe you have made me a fan of this pair. Even though it was shorter than i expected, i really liked this story and enjoyed reading it very much. So thank you.
person smint45
schedule January 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was such a sweet story!!!! I really hope there will be a little smutty epiloge but the story is completly perfect without it!!!! Such a great ending^^I adored all of it!!! Thanks a lot for posting this!!!!!