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for The Heart Of The Matter

by Daydreamer79

person ichigopudding
schedule December 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aww, bye-bye Sasu <3
Oh Naru, you beacon of hope... or is that his hair? xx
Soo adorable xx
person ichigopudding
schedule December 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aww so so cute, poor Itachi <3
Naru is so so cute xx
person Nejislady
schedule December 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
T___T This is so intense and full of emotion. I love this story cuz it is hard to let loved ones go. You capture that so expressly with Itachi that I can feel his pain and trepidation. Naruto will be the light they need in their dark lives. Itachi needs to realize this and then he can grieve properly. Can't wait for your next chapter. This is great reading.x3
person smint45
schedule December 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was great!!! I hope that Itachi will come around and accept that he need help!!!! Hope that everything will work out for the three of them!!! See you again soon!!!!
schedule December 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've never read a story with Naruto and Kisame being in a relationship together but I like this story. So please keep up the good work and update soon. :)
person satterb
schedule December 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This second chapter was just wonderful. I love how you made the plot work so effortlessly. It was believable that Naruto would have huge reservations and that Kisame would turn Itachis own manipulations around on him. LOL. I thought it was super sweet and sexy the way Kisame was nervous yet intent on "wooing" Naruto. I can't wait to see more of this story. Thank you for all your hard work.
person Chrissy
schedule December 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm not ordinarily a fan of incest between Itachi and Sasuke and i've never really went out of my way to read a story involving Kisame. But i have to say, i'm glad i went ahead and starting reading this. I'm finding it to be a very touching story so far and i especially am enjoying Kisame's character in this. And sweet Naruto, being so open minded, compassionate and willing to listen and not judge. Looking forward to reading more chapters.
person satterb
schedule December 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Your comments at the end of this chapter make me wonder about people...when reading the story summary, it's plain to see that this story is going to be A/U. Why would anyone complain...after reading...that you're not sticking to cannon? Maybe I just misunderstood. But because your stories are usually A/U they are going to give the reader a wonderful plot with some beloved characters. I love your stories and I like that you write whatever you want without trying to stick to a cannon universe. Thank you so much for your hard work, and I look forward to the next chapter of this story also.
person Lilly
schedule December 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I know you are gifting this to someone else but you posted it on my birthday so I am considering it as a gift for myself. Such a lovely gift that made me cry like a baby. I look forward to the three of them finding some happiness and kink really soon.
schedule December 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this so far! Very touching and emotional.