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I love this! Don't know if it's shouta but the fact that it is relatively new after I have scoured this site for years now, and actually original/fun to read, pleases me. I honestly have no critiques for it because it is very well strung together with just the right combination of everything. I'm just hoping Naruto in the end gets to top, since he is older but who knows? Every story is different and surprisingly enough I trust your lemons to satisfy me. I don't even care to read smut between the Nara and Inuzuka but you had me enthralled down to the last sentence. Great job and keep up the good work!

One bone that I must pick with you is, I know you have a life that you are probably VERY MUCH consumed with but PLEASE for the sake of a fan update a little more...or at least give an estimated waiting time. I don't want to be waiting on a chapter for weeks on end with no hope as to when the next one will be. Its been out since December of last year and only 3 chapters made me think maybe 2 to 3 month waiting and the thought is too much to bear without my addiction! But still, much love anyway!

I like it, but I'm more interested in Naruto's and Sasuke's relationship.

Wow....GOL! ShikaKiba! and omg I just read the comments and going 10 years without sex!....but I don't wanna read Naru with anyone else! dilemma dilemma....*sigh* oh well guess i'll have to wait until the next chappy and on to find out.

Oh and GOL means Giggle out loud because sometimes its just a giigle and not a full on laugh...mostly the giggles say "oh you naughty boy(s)!"

Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.

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Sasu is so cute! that is one hell of an age difference though. and Shika and Kiba are bad boys! doing that in front of little Sasu! Write more please!

Awesome chapter, I definitely enjoyed the fluff, Sasuke is just unbelievably cute. As for the the angsty teenager comment, I hope that isn't foreshadowing anything.

Sasuke getting attached to Kiba was cute. And actually very realistic. Which of Naruto's friends would a five year-old end up liking? Obviously the one with the giant dog. There is NO contest! Him giving Kiba love advice was also rather cute. You can see how precocious Sasuke is, even at age 5. You should totally have them continue to be friends as Sasuke grows up. (It totally gives Naruto the opportunity to be jealous of Sasuke having another big brother figure in his life--and feel confused for being jealous over something innocent, and which should technically be a good thing.)

I also had to groan over the comment about Sasuke turning into an “angsty teenager.” Well, there's angst and then there's ANGST. I think if it's normal angst (lowercase), it should be fine. If it's manga-level Sasuke ANGST, that's a little more tricky since in this story, Sasuke would have been raised in a loving environment first by his parents and then Naruto, so he wouldn't have had the chance to fall into despair the way manga Sasuke did. (Without a family to watch out for him, all that kid did from the time Itachi killed his family until the time he ran away from Konoha was brood on his own tragedy and thoughts of vengeance.)

I'll continue to look forward to Naruto's ongoing journey as a single father. :)

Nooooo, you can't leave this story like that!? I wanna know what happen next so bad. ;_;