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So happy to see the return of this once thought dead story. Honestly, I do hope you push the envelope for the citrus in the next chapter. You've obviously lined up Sasuke(Naruto henge) and Sakura in addition to something involving Nakuto(each chapter has now had a different name, first Naru, then Naruko, now Nakuto. Can you settle on one?) with the Sarutobi note(god I would love to see Kushina clone pop out and they take a trip to his office), but other then that you're pretty open. Considering the Sakura event in play, I would hope you shake things up with her and Ino hanging out before they both head to Naruto's house because Ino is in disbelief at Sakura's meeting. You could play on it further by having someone involved suggest that Sasuke(henge) transform into Naruto or Sexy Jutsu clone after events from the first chapter might be remembered(hint, both Mizuki and Hinata ****ing Nakuto and Naruto respectively in front of everybody in class), causing a unique moment of what the action might be like. Honestly, I'd prefer a Naruto/Ino and Nakuto/Sakura balance of such as Ino is more girly and thus seems more prone to male/female fantasies whereas Sakura is more likely in my eyes to having occasional yuri fantasies... Anyway, thanks for the update and please update again soon!

It's very cool! Tho it can be a little confuzing...

Wtf?

You have no idea how pleased I was to see this particular story return. I hadn't expected it to after the long delay in postings. Your plot may be mediocre, but it is a rushed version of canon and not the focus so it is of no concern. The sex scenes are actually quite decent and really enjoyable. The humor is also rather nice. The fact that it has a "Naruko" character is quite nice as I always liked the idea of female Naruto's. Anyhow, I just wanted to review to say I'm quite glad you updated.

well that was interesting I hope you update this again sometime soon.

Fantastic chapter. I love the idea of Naruko offering up her body to Hiruzen, as that is something very few have ever attempted and is a great point of originality to the story. Given this, I do wonder on whether you may have Hiruzen take advantage of his female ANBU bodyguards such as Yuugao. It would be very funny to have Hiruzen getting a hummer while sitting next to Iruka handing Team 7 the Wave mission.

Anyway the plan with Naruko being Hiruzen's secretary for a day is pretty funny and I was very happy with Konohamaru walking in on Naruko and Hiruzen. Of course Hiruzen made fantastic use of Genjutsu here by also fooling Ebisu to the scene that was really happening. Having Hiruzen then use a mini Fire jutsu to rid his office of the evidence of his semen was also cool, but would have been even better had you made Hiruzen destroy some of his paperwork so he would need to work longer.

The scene with Naruto and Konohamaru where Naruto started teaching Konohamaru the Sexy Jutsu was a really great move. Having a small yuri scene with the civilian woman who Konohamaru was attempting to imitate was a cool move, and I'm glad that this has happened before the two boys went to the training grounds where the teaching begins in earnest. This is because I fully expect you to take advantage of Naruko's being a split personality in regards to Ebisu preventing Naruto teaching Kono. The fact that this would be the first introduction of the Harem Jutsu would make this lemon very difficult to write, unless you planned on having the Harem Jutsu be split between Kono and Ebisu having sex with the many Narukos present at the time.

Moving on, we will be having the Jonin meeting taking place right after the meeting of Ebisu and Naruto according to canon. Given that you have made an excuse for Naruko to be Hiruzen's assistant for the next day rather then going to school, I do wonder if you may have her take the same path that she did when Kono attacked his grandfather. I ask this because in that meeting you will have a Genjutsu expert in Kurenai present who will be the most likely to see through Hiruzen's deception. Now considering that Kurenai and Asuma never truly got together until after the timeskip, what would the chances be that she might ask to talk to Hiruzen after the meeting because she detected Naruko? Such a situation would be very interesting, no?

Also after the team placements you have Naruto transforming into Sasuke to woo Sakura. I am interested in whether Naruto as Sasuke may try to take advantage of the situation before he stomach gets upset and he goes to the bathroom. This could then lead to a potential Sakura attempting to rape Sasuke scene as she would have likely been turned on after Naruto left. Just a thought, but the idea of seeing everyone get equal time for lemons does appeal to me however I would understand if you focused solely on lemons for Naruto alone with many others.

Anyway, I am glad to see that this story is back up. From what I gather the story was hidden for a time and I had never gotten to read the second chapter prior to this. The fact that you brought it back must mean that you are still working on it, so I do hope that you will continue to update regardless of the lack of reviews you have been getting. This is one of the more interesting rehashings of Naruto due to how you are focusing on lemons and using the Sexy Jutsu to a massive extent. Please keep up the great work and update soon:)

sarutobi/naruko? kinky. can't wait to see what happens to Naruto/Naruko during the chunin exam.I can imagine the cheek licking scene with anko going much further.

Hey, this story is hot as heck! It has quickly become a favorite of mine. Can't wait to see more. Sadly, there's not many stories like urs over here.

I see ur getting to the Sabuza arc soon. Could you pleeeease have Inari fuck Sakuras brains out while she is sleeping?? U know, like a curious and perverted kid he is lol. It'd be awesome if Naruto catches them too lol.

Anyway, keep up the great work and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Hold on a minute! Naruko was a different person with her own mind? ...Pure fucking genius...!

This was surprisingly good for a first attempt. I would like to see Naruto's first encounter with Kyuubi in the second chapter.