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by RyuuOokami

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schedule April 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
cute and sweet. i liked it add more?
schedule January 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yes, because there's no such thing as surrogacy, eh Naruto? That said, this was very sweet, if brief and well-thought out and explored as an idea. You could attempt to add more detail to your descriptions of things here and there, but otherwise this was great. =0)
schedule January 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was really short, but incredible cute! Nice!
Happy New Year by the way!
schedule January 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that was sweet :)