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for Growing up

by vermilioncream

person Anon
schedule January 17, 2021 at 12:00 AM

hey can I  be in the story 

person Anon
schedule May 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It's good that they are making progress with their relationship and family, but there was at least one thing left unresolved... Fugaku was looking into the murder of Naruto's parents. Whatever became of that?
person Akira
schedule May 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
it was nice reading the whole story. congrats for finish it ^^
person Talltree-san
schedule May 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it took Sasuke getting nearly beaten to death to knock some sense into Fugaku! But I'm so glad Sasuke is alright now and all is well between him and Naruto :D !
person Akira
schedule March 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Thanks for this wonderful chappie Naru topping was great! And finally Itachi is happy and decided to make his own way, I am happy for that. I feel so sad for Fugaku and the fact that he will never recognize Sasuke for who he is and I hope Sasuke take te righ choice and stay with Naruto rather than leaving him for some fake recognition.

Thanks for this update, looking forward for the next one.
person Talltree-san
schedule March 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
To be honest I didn't really care for Naruto topping... PLEASE FORGIVE ME DX ! But that's just me in general with Naruto as top or seme in any story. Once I got my idea of who should always be top or bottom it is pretty much set in stone for me. But I do realize that there is a ton of people who like Naruto as the seme in a relationship so I am alright with it once every blue moon :) . And lastly I am so not digging Fugaku right now, I bet he was brain storming for all this time trying to figure out a way to break up Sasuke and Naruto! If I was Sasuke I would say to that little proposal of Fugaku's to shove where the sun don't shine! Also I'm not sure what the age of legal adulthood is in Japan but when Sasuke and Naruto hits it they should just pack up and leave since Fugaku is obviously not getting over the fact that his youngest son is gay and in love with Naruto. But... that's if Sasuke loves Naruto more than the position of CEO. That would be a great idea for an alternate sequel story for if Sasuke did choose to break it off with Naruto for the position as sad as that would be and they got back together later in their years.
person Akira
schedule March 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I guess the way how you portray Sasuke at the begining and the fact that I am more a NaruSasu fan that a SasuNaru ^^ but i am open to the last one or when the top/bottom thing is in balance between both of them you know? What I dont like of SasuNaru is that usually writers make Naru so girly and dependent of a seme, but you have manage to create a good balance of character so I feel happy with your work despite being the way I usually dont like ^^ you have done great.

And Fianlly Itachi will have a new light! I am so glad for him.
person Talltree-san
schedule March 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Saved by the bell indeed XD lol! That is one of the reasons why you shouldn't do all that sexting business especially if you're still in class :D ! Also I feel really sorry for Itachi, he really needs to take a stand and do what really makes him happy. Maybe sweet Hinata can help push him in that direction :) ?
person Talltree-san
schedule March 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh happy hugs for everyone, the folks took the news fairly well! Mikoto more so than Fugaku, but he will get over it! (^_^)
person Akira
schedule March 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It definitely has a feeling that this is going to come to and end soon, still i am quite happy with this chapter, although i had the idea that the story will be NaruSasu, i am ok with it being SasuNaru ^^ is not so bad. Nad Mikoto, wow what a mom ^_^ now we only need to Itachi to finally find someone to love, ne?

Thanks for the update.