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August 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Superp executed.
The perils, duties and jobs a Kunoichi has to do.
And as grimdark as real with the silver lining at the end.
I hope you continue this line with other kunoichi.
Hinata would be expert grade because, who wouldn't have heard of the Byakugan.
The perils, duties and jobs a Kunoichi has to do.
And as grimdark as real with the silver lining at the end.
I hope you continue this line with other kunoichi.
Hinata would be expert grade because, who wouldn't have heard of the Byakugan.
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March 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story SNaruko. While you really pushed the line with this story, it certainly fits the world Naruto is set in. That said, I liked it a lot. Having Naruko working as undercover to stop a bandit/slaver ring by going through the same treatment as the other girls is definitely something I haven't seen before, but really it does seem as something believable. Though this story does have me interested in not only how Naruko got into this line of work, but also why the Hokage(whether Hiruzen or Tsunade) would even allow Naruko to do this. Therefore I must call for a sequel/prequel so we can see how Naruko ended up as a Seduction specialist kunoichi. I wouldn't be the least bit surprised if Jiraiya may in fact be responsible for it though:)
Anyway, thank you for the good read SNaruko. While this story does interest me, frankly it doesn't seem to hold much of a plot based on this one chapter alone when compared to Spiraling Love. This can change should a second chapter come out which includes the main character reporting on the status of her mission and whatever else, but as it stands now this is just a oneshot lemon story. Nothing wrong with that, but a plot that explains what Naruko's purpose is and how she serves the greater good would be greatly appreciated considering your talent in writing. Especially when such plot involves what the other girls in the Konoha 12 may think of Naruko's work, as this story focuses on kunoichi issues in the ninja world. Have a nice day and keep up the great work:)
Anyway, thank you for the good read SNaruko. While this story does interest me, frankly it doesn't seem to hold much of a plot based on this one chapter alone when compared to Spiraling Love. This can change should a second chapter come out which includes the main character reporting on the status of her mission and whatever else, but as it stands now this is just a oneshot lemon story. Nothing wrong with that, but a plot that explains what Naruko's purpose is and how she serves the greater good would be greatly appreciated considering your talent in writing. Especially when such plot involves what the other girls in the Konoha 12 may think of Naruko's work, as this story focuses on kunoichi issues in the ninja world. Have a nice day and keep up the great work:)
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March 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! I would've liked to see some DP though. I hope you'll write more in the future!
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February 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. I wouldn't mind seeing more of this.
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February 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well I rarely and I mean rarely seen ficus where people in naruto take their job seriously to much jutsu using so kudos for you for being the 2nd fic to do so
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February 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
very nice keep up the good work
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February 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It's very sad that Naruko has to go through this just to do her job, but she's a real hero for putting up with such suffering to save these people. Granted i'm pretty sure you just wrote this so you and your loser friends could fap to rape.
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February 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this is great, I look foward tot he enxt chpater, because its going to be a next chapter rigth?