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by Daydreamer79

person k
schedule July 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
With the exception of Hinata, they were all kind of assholes weren't they? Fugaku is the worst of them all of course. I understand he wants to seek his own happiness but he doesn't seem to give a damn about his son and he wants to talk about how much he doesn't want somebody to take away his happiness? How fucked up is that? He couldn't be assed to take care of his son like he should, yet when it comes to his own happiness he's just one selfish bastard? And Itachi, it's the FACT that Sasuke would NEVER get a normal relationship with someone again that he should be given time. First, to process the fact that his FATHER is fucking his BEST FRIEND. Not only that, his father who he believes doesn't give a damn about him is so selfish about his own fucking happiness. God, Naruto didn't deserve to be paralysed but Fugaku sure deserved to die. And Naruto, what the fuck? THis is your best friend. Sure what he said hurt you but comeon , you're fucking his FATHER. God, my dad can't speak like he used to and he lashes out on us but we take it because we LOVE him. It says a lot about this kind of fucked up family. He didn't have to do much but at least the idiot of a fucking father could be more sensitive. I don't know maybe he could have fucked Sasuke's best friend somewhere else? A hotel maybe? Like the guy can never have normal sex again. Have some fucking sympathy. God, I kind of want to slap them all.
person Guest
schedule May 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I would like this story more if everyone wasn't a complete bastard to Sasuke. Jesus Christ, I know he's not a saint, but by the way they treat him, you would think that they really hated him. If he killed himself, I wouldn't even be suprised.
person satterb
schedule March 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I felt really bad for Sasuke being rushed from the tavern like that. Poor thing. I think you kept all these characters spot on! But you always do. LOL Thanks for another glance at this fictions reality. I look forward to more. Also, I love the way you write Hinata. She's the coolest!