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March 31, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is so hot!
I can't wait for Kushina to join in on the fun. I also hope Mikoto gets in on the action eventually.
I can't wait for Kushina to join in on the fun. I also hope Mikoto gets in on the action eventually.
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February 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Damn, frakk'it.
Just write the next chapter, damn'it.
I wanna read more. T.T
Just write the next chapter, damn'it.
I wanna read more. T.T
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May 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Been on this site for a long time. How come I never saw this? I saw it on FFN... glad I put this to my Rec. Reading tabs. God it makes me feel so "warm" inside, reading such dirty smuttiness and incest between bro/sis. Such great writing and attention to "good detail". Hehehe...
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March 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
seria si agregas a hinata ademas de kushina and narumi
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March 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
strange i feel like i am reading a au of mahouka keikou no rettousai
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March 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great, epic story so far. I love the constant use of Onii-sama by Narumi and pleased by the devotion she has for Naruto. Naruto himself being very possessive of Narumi is definitely a bonus and I am getting the feeling that a similar relationship exists between Naruto and Kushina(at least I certainly hope so, especially if Kushina herself has a similar personality to Narumi in the privacy of their home). Frankly this is the kind of Uzumakicest stories I really love seeing, but are so few in number.
Anyway I do wonder how you may deal with the never-ending horde of Fangirls that pursue Naruto and wonder what may happen with Narumi at times when she and Naruto are separated. I get the feeling that Narumi must have suffered some indignity by the villagers at some point in time to cause her to only love Naruto and judging from not only your pen name, but also the description of your other story(which I will certainly be reading very soon), I would hope that we may see what happened.
Anyway thank you for the great story Naruko. You certainly have a gift for writing citrus and frankly I want more. Keep up the great work and have a nice day:)
Anyway I do wonder how you may deal with the never-ending horde of Fangirls that pursue Naruto and wonder what may happen with Narumi at times when she and Naruto are separated. I get the feeling that Narumi must have suffered some indignity by the villagers at some point in time to cause her to only love Naruto and judging from not only your pen name, but also the description of your other story(which I will certainly be reading very soon), I would hope that we may see what happened.
Anyway thank you for the great story Naruko. You certainly have a gift for writing citrus and frankly I want more. Keep up the great work and have a nice day:)
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March 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i have no idea why, but this taboo for Naruto seems to work the best out of every other piece of fiction. Other than hitting my funny spot, so to speak, in terms of certain themes and interests, you've done a rather good job of writing. Keep up the good work.
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March 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Naruko honey, I love your story:) Truly you have a gift in romance, but at the same time you manage quite well in telling the little things that can matter in the future. This was evidenced in the flashback Narumi had where she and Naruto were separated. Of course while I severely doubt Narumi will have suffered a rape at the age of before 10 years old, living in the world of Shinobi(especially when you have an avenger nutjob around who only wants the strongest of women) such a thing could happen in the future. Whether it does happen or not, I really want to see Naruto upset for something(whatever it may be) to have happened to Narumi.
Anyway I am quite happy that you added some info on Kushina's public personality. Also adding the fact that she most likely knows of Naruto and Narumi's relationship certainly helps matters for when Kushina does make her debut. Frankly this story reminds me in many ways of Uzumaki Chronicles: The Swirling Tides by AkashXD on the other site for fanfics. That said, you certainly have your differences and I must say I am really looking forward to what may come in the future.
On another subject though, I was glad that you mentioned how the other girls may or may not be with Naruto in the future. While I certainly wouldn't have an issue with that, I really liked how this chapter showed off how Narumi is not afraid of losing Naruto and may even be willing to step on more then a few toes when someone steps out of line as shown by the small scene in the restaurant with the serving girl. This makes me wonder though if Narumi might ok some girls to be with Naruto or not. After all, she was shown to be friendly with Ino and Sakura but this could just be for show. Still the thought of a Naruto/Narumi/Ino scene does have my interest peaked.
Anyway Naruko, thank you for the great story. I really like the style you write and do hope that you will update soon. Keep up the great work and have a nice day:)
Anyway I am quite happy that you added some info on Kushina's public personality. Also adding the fact that she most likely knows of Naruto and Narumi's relationship certainly helps matters for when Kushina does make her debut. Frankly this story reminds me in many ways of Uzumaki Chronicles: The Swirling Tides by AkashXD on the other site for fanfics. That said, you certainly have your differences and I must say I am really looking forward to what may come in the future.
On another subject though, I was glad that you mentioned how the other girls may or may not be with Naruto in the future. While I certainly wouldn't have an issue with that, I really liked how this chapter showed off how Narumi is not afraid of losing Naruto and may even be willing to step on more then a few toes when someone steps out of line as shown by the small scene in the restaurant with the serving girl. This makes me wonder though if Narumi might ok some girls to be with Naruto or not. After all, she was shown to be friendly with Ino and Sakura but this could just be for show. Still the thought of a Naruto/Narumi/Ino scene does have my interest peaked.
Anyway Naruko, thank you for the great story. I really like the style you write and do hope that you will update soon. Keep up the great work and have a nice day:)
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March 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter, Liked it alot!
However, there is one thing that I didn't like much. The way Naruto though it, it made it sound like the only reason he loved Naruko was BECAUSE she was his.
However, there is one thing that I didn't like much. The way Naruto though it, it made it sound like the only reason he loved Naruko was BECAUSE she was his.
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March 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
great fic, and I hope you continue both of your fics