rate_review Reviews

This story is really great!

If you must know, this story had me bawling like a baby. Now my eyes are swollen, thank you very much. I would love to find out what happens next. Please do continue. Did you ever get to finish this story? Please do. I hope Naruto finds new love. Or I hope Sasuke comes after him crawling and begging for Naruto to take him back.

the story is good so far... i hope that Amatsuki can convince Naruto to back with her and the boys to Konoha.... I need to know what happens next... please update as soon as you can

Nobody in this story is behaving very logically. Relationships break up all the time. I should know, my parents are divorced, and half my friends have divorced parents, too. Divorce hurts like hell, but you deal with it and move on, same as millions of people do every day. So why is Naruto being all dramatic about it and running away from home like a stupid teenager? What about his dream of being Hokage? All he had to do was get a house on the other side of the village and avoid Sasuke except when dropping the kids off at his house. He's being hella selfish dumping his sons on their asshole father and running off. The twins need him too. Sasuke didn't care about him leaving. Naruto and his daughter weren't in any danger from him until they left the village. It's just drama drama drama that none of them had to go through.

And Sasuke is being weird. His personality totally changed all of a sudden? Why? He had an affair because Naruto had an affair or because he doesn't love him any more, but then oh, Naruto still has his heart. Does he love Naruto, or does he not love Naruto? Why, if he was totally happy with his marriage before, would he even look at another person? And he's also totally lost his balls, doesn't care about the kids anymore, and is dead inside. WTF is going on? Is he clinically depressed? Or what? People's personalities don't suddenly change overnight. Whatever problem he's got with Naruto, why would it make him into an uncaring asshole when it comes to his kids? (And this is the person Naruto thought it would be a good idea to have raise his sons...)

I'm putting way too much thought into trying to understand the characters this fic.

Awesome chappies, thank you bunches :D !

this is not your story. i know i've read it before. naruto will go to sauna, leave the daughter there, sasuke will go looking for them,etc.just stop.

I cant wait for the next chapter.

I really liked this story. It's sad but it is written well. I hope you write more soon.

I really love this story, hopefully it gets happier. I was in tears in this chapter it was a sad goodbye. Also is Naruto going to Suna?

I know I have read this story before. Are you rewriting this story? Either way I'm happy to read it again and hopefully see it finished as well :) ?