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July 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Amazing and incredibly hot!
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April 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow just amazing I had been waiting for more to be add, and low and behold you answer my prayers lol.
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December 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I Give This Chapter A 96/100
Here's an Idea for a Chapter:
What if Cherry/Tayuya got a little Too careless when Training Slut/Tsume and Bitch/Hana and they tried to escape,
only to be caught by Anko, who then punishes all three of them, two for trying to escape and the other for letting it happen.
But the punishment given by Anko is very light compared to what Naruko does once Anko tells her what happened,
I'm not sure about what she should do to Cherry/Tayuya, but here's my idea for what she should do with Slut/Tsume and Bitch/Hana:
She should attach her new Special Strap-on to Slut/Tsume and test it on Bitch/Hana and check to make sure it work like she hopes for.
This way Naruko can kills two birds with one stone, or in this case, two Bitches with one Strap-on:
by punishing them and making sure she will be able to give Tsunade all the "Daughters" either one could want.
(Since X-X times X-X will always=X-X and can never=X-Y, unless the Seals can change X-(X-Female DNA) into X-(Y-Male DNA) so they can have Sons or maybe Futas(Have both Male and Female genitals)which you might add to the story). Also what if Naruko fake Haku's(Who turned-out to Futa)Death an enslaved her.
Here's an Idea for a Chapter:
What if Cherry/Tayuya got a little Too careless when Training Slut/Tsume and Bitch/Hana and they tried to escape,
only to be caught by Anko, who then punishes all three of them, two for trying to escape and the other for letting it happen.
But the punishment given by Anko is very light compared to what Naruko does once Anko tells her what happened,
I'm not sure about what she should do to Cherry/Tayuya, but here's my idea for what she should do with Slut/Tsume and Bitch/Hana:
She should attach her new Special Strap-on to Slut/Tsume and test it on Bitch/Hana and check to make sure it work like she hopes for.
This way Naruko can kills two birds with one stone, or in this case, two Bitches with one Strap-on:
by punishing them and making sure she will be able to give Tsunade all the "Daughters" either one could want.
(Since X-X times X-X will always=X-X and can never=X-Y, unless the Seals can change X-(X-Female DNA) into X-(Y-Male DNA) so they can have Sons or maybe Futas(Have both Male and Female genitals)which you might add to the story). Also what if Naruko fake Haku's(Who turned-out to Futa)Death an enslaved her.
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July 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great story; nice, steady, plot development with lots of fun... The amount of humiliation and torture is just plain stupid (which some people might like). I find SOME chapters disturbing (being forced to drink pee? EW!). The amount of bondage though, is very consensual and make the experience pleasant. Naruko's character I especially like, first a nieve sister... then a full blown slave owner... -!!!!SPOLIER ALERT!!!!- then she gets transformed by her older sister. The teasing here and there is acutely delectable.
10/10 Great job author, I thank you for your time, and dedicated. =)
10/10 Great job author, I thank you for your time, and dedicated. =)
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May 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
please update this story. its the best one i have read on this site.
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May 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
please update this story. its the best one i have read on this site.
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March 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Damnnnnn!!! Can you believe I'm actually still reading this for the story (although that's in no way to say I don't enjoy the smut :P)
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July 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am here for teh lolz.
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July 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story, but I must admit you would probably get more feedback at hentai foundry since they lean more het/yuri/futa than aff's yaoi heavy population.
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June 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about reviewing twice, in a way, but I refound my account details. I am Veyron's co-writer, as I said. And we have material ready for submitting, once I get my head round the disclaimer.