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June 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
one idea you could do would be to expand on the scene with Moegi. Maybe have Hanabi capture her, Anko break her, then have them give her to their mistress as a gift.
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June 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
as Always a great chapter, love the mother daugther incest, and absolutley loved the cake mixing, and the fact that the cakes will be used in a party, oh damn i loved that, i will be waiting for the next chapter, see ya then
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June 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Please continue. And ignore DumbassLizard. You included the Rape and Torture tags and started each chapter with a reminder that the story included kidnapping and rape. They have no right to complain. Plus what kind of idiot loser seriously compares a story like this to some real world sicko? This is fantasy not reality and they need to learn to accept that. Update soon.
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June 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
loved it, hope you continue .
best story i've read in a long time.
best story i've read in a long time.
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June 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please don't stop writing. I really enjoy this story and I love your creative twists. Please don't abandon all your hard work and all of your fans!
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June 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I hope you keep going
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June 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Phenomenal story! I can't wait to see how Sakura (kitty) develops. Perhaps she can teach Tenten to love piercings. Ino is coming along in an interesting manner. Some people were complaining about the human furniture, and while that's not my thing, it's a far more interesting and original way to break someone than simply beating them. I see it as more a part of latex immersion therapy getting her slaves to be so used to latex that it becomes normal and even prefferable.
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May 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You went to far with the living chair.
At this point the Mistress is literally turning people into objects.
A kind of living death as pain and sensory deprivation slowly destroy their minds.
Until their barely human any more.
At this point, female Naruto seems just like that guy who kept Elizabeth Smart prisoner for over a decade.
At this point the Mistress is literally turning people into objects.
A kind of living death as pain and sensory deprivation slowly destroy their minds.
Until their barely human any more.
At this point, female Naruto seems just like that guy who kept Elizabeth Smart prisoner for over a decade.
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May 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Even if Tsunade somehow enjoyed the Mistress's treatment of her, its completely unlike her to feel no compassion for the other people enslaved with her (who should have been under the Hokage's protection). Especially the mother and daughter who in real life would probably die due to their mistreat (they would not be able to eat, exercise, or maintain the will to live most likely).
At this point, female Naruto has actually gone far beyond what most real life rapists would do (assuming the rapists were not also killers).
At this point, female Naruto has actually gone far beyond what most real life rapists would do (assuming the rapists were not also killers).
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May 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i slightly agree with SexyLizard but i still beleve it is a very good story. just plese try and minimise the dehuminising of the slaves too much.