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Not bad, I like it.

Just again no futa and your good(if you dont know what that is its a girl with a dick)

Im hoping tenten isnt the girl mentioned in this chapter, I figured she would be better jsut as a nomral sex slave or something.

I can think of a nickname and role for her if you need one.

If you want a villianness to use in this story that is totally un expected then I would go with Demona or the Evil Kim Possible from another story on this site. Demona just because she hates humans witj such a passion and the Evil Kim because in the story I am thinking of has her morals flipped and will do anything she wants.

Just dont do any scat or futa and youll be fine.

a bit twisted, I hope it doesnt get weirder than this, just pelase stay way rom scatt or fecal play, that's where i draw the line

Thought I should provide some feedback since I enjoy this fic so much. I enjoy the plot, not usually into complete yuri but this is great.

I love how you're introducing a variety of characters, a lot of secondary characters are completely ignored so it's nice to see them used.

I'm not a fan of piss so that makes me slightly uneasy but I also understand that some enjoy it and the quality of the story makes up for it.

Perhaps in the future you could have slaves pit against each other or placed into mutual bondage, maybe even get a reversal so Naruko gets her turn as a slave.

Great story, don't stop writing.

Some hot stuff, really enjoy the total helplessness of the situation. I'm glad to see you included Tayuya as well, she was a great character that was wasted for nothing. I don't know if they meet your requirements but a few female villains include Konan, Karin, Guren and Fubuki. Fubuki is probably the closest to your criteria but she only appeared in one of the filler movies. Anyways keep up the good work, eagerly anticipating the new chapters.

im not sure i can help with ideas, but i wanted to say thanks for writing this. Its great.

Umm...female villans..
Karin-she willingly worked with orochi and then sasuke.....
Fuuku
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/F%C5%ABka
Guren-before she trys to be a better person
maybe one of the fuma chicks who joined orochi...

in regards to female villains. a shippuden filler arc has provided a perfect one. http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fuka fuka. I think she is exactly what you are looking for

Try karin She is the most annoying charecter to date

Could you make the Inuzuka clan into Narukos pet dogs?

Make them have dildos inside of them or wear strap ons and anal bead tails.

Can you have Naruko make Hinata her harem leader because they're already a couple? Hinata wouldn't get the slave treatment, she'd get light bondage and Naruko using the other girls to tease her but they'd play with the rest of the harem together?

The fox chakra made Kushinas hair go crazy, and the fox has 9 tails sooo TENTACLE TIME! Well chakra tail time but same thing.