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for Revenge Of The Mind Walker

by TheLegendaryDumbass

person SuperSamm
schedule November 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Ino can't make a solid clone.

person MagicMan
schedule December 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
lololol at all the raging Hinata fans. Great fic! Akamaru fucking Hinata, while Hinata eats out Ino was just perfect
person spiritwolf
schedule June 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story I would love to see you do more chapters where Akamaru has sex with all the Naruto Females
person spiritwolf
schedule March 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I think you should do more stories like this but have it where Akamaru has sex with more girls than just Hinata if you do a story like that then I would love to read it
person Jeff
schedule September 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Let's see what Ino says once the Hyuuga clan goes to war with them.
person Mars
schedule April 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Why didn't Hinata,say, Jyuuken Ino in the heart or throat when she was so close? Trigger a clot that would lead to a pulmonary embolism if not reversed; see how that changes Ino's tune.
person summer
schedule April 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
more stories need to use that Jutsu,
schedule April 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM

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person Anon
schedule April 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Although this has been said before, I'm guessing you aren't a fan of Hinata
schedule April 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
man great job on the one shot. it was very good. im guessing u dont really like hinata since in teh 3 storys u have she is pretty much screwed. so looking forward to see what u do for your next story. did 2 akamaru with hinata and one with her being caught. so what next hinata taking care of hanas dogs and tehy have there way with her?