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for Breathless Sacrifice

by Snowway32

person dragonfly_dust
schedule July 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like the fanfic but the "Amai-Itachi" threw me off as a Japanese speaker. While "amai" does mean sweet, when describing a person the word means "naive" so it made no sense in context. Plus no one attaches "amai" to a person's name that way...both grammatically or in slang.

It's just...silly.