rate_review Reviews

Dude! Killer story! You have to make a second chapter!

Why does it have to be cheating?

Why does it always have to be Naruto that is cheated on in these fics(and on this site)?

You couldn't have had Hinata dating Kiba instead? Or just not dating anyone? Why not have her actively trying to be with Naruto who keeps on turning her down cuz he likes Sakura and Sasuke comes in to show her she should be with him?

Your last submission was Naruto's mom cheating on her husband, while she is pregnant. Now it's Naruto's girlfriend. I wonder what is next, future-Naruto's daughter with some guy his age? Kiba? Sasuke? Hell, Konohamaru?

Hey Smdh if you don't like it don't read it. Stop tryig to make Naruto a victim, he is the most beta main character of all time and is the worst character of the manga.

why would you write this shit?

Not a huge fan of the subject matter but you are an excellent writer so I can't complain.

Hey, if Naruto can't satisfy his woman and is too retarded to see the signs, he deserves what he gets. That's always been my stance on NTR in general. And even though I loath Sasuke basically on principle, I still enjoyed this story. Why? Because you don't go overboard with the whole adultery thing. Unlike others who see fit to remind us of it EVERY. OTHER. PARAGRAPH. And ruin the flow of the lemon with repetitive bullshit, you just focus on the two characters involved. If I'm reading a Hina/Sasu lemon(I couldn't suppress a shudder as I typed that), I don't want to see Naruto's name pop up 40 freakin' times. I know she's cheating on him, I get it, the horse is dead, put the hammer away.

Luckily, this story didn't fall into that hole, and I applaud you for it.