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July 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Unbelievably hot! Can't wait for more!!
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July 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
“Do you swear on your honor?” Naruto pressed. This would be the last chance he would give her.
Shinobi have no honor that would be samurai...although at the same time the shinobi of Naruto are...off to put it nicely.
I was sure Fu would have been the next one considering Naruto was going to Waterfall last chapter.
Not much on rape of any kind but this was overly tame and considering a deal had been struck was not rape. A contract is a contract: if you do not heed it than more can be taken.
Shinobi have no honor that would be samurai...although at the same time the shinobi of Naruto are...off to put it nicely.
I was sure Fu would have been the next one considering Naruto was going to Waterfall last chapter.
Not much on rape of any kind but this was overly tame and considering a deal had been struck was not rape. A contract is a contract: if you do not heed it than more can be taken.
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July 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
what about yugito ni from kumo
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July 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty awsome
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June 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Hope Naruto did knock up Iwa's princess .... man would that be funny as the baby grows up and his hair gradually turns brighter and brighter but maybe she gets away from too much explaining because the babys eyes are a light brown and green instead of blue. Well initially that is.
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June 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I certainly enjoyed this chapter. That probably says something negative about me, but it doesn't change the fact that you write very well.
I'm not particularly looking forward to Mabui, but I'll read anything you write. I just hope you throw Yugito in with those Kumo girls! I'm pretty sure I already reviewed this before, and I don't have much else to say, so for now, keep up the good work!
I'm not particularly looking forward to Mabui, but I'll read anything you write. I just hope you throw Yugito in with those Kumo girls! I'm pretty sure I already reviewed this before, and I don't have much else to say, so for now, keep up the good work!
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June 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
you need to make a yugito chapter, a shizuka from nadeshiko village chapter, a Ryūzetsu from kusagakure chapter, etc... so many options from filler and movies.
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June 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Kurotsuchi went down hard and sweet quite perfect for her considering her nature and was able to put up a fight until she breko to him
looking foward to the future chapters and if possible do wish to see fetishes in here liek footjobs
looking foward to the future chapters and if possible do wish to see fetishes in here liek footjobs
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June 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
third chapter and i'm already starting to lose interest in your story,last chapter was practically rape,i'm not really fan of these kind of fanfics,it's getting monotenous with you erasing all of the women's personnalities once sex starts.it feels like i'm reading the same chapter all over again.if you change the way women are treated instead of always being dominated,your fic might get a lot better.
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June 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A few repeating words and some grammar mistakes but other than that a good chapter. Hope to see Temari show up eventually, even if she and her brothers are friends of Naruto she can still be taken as a lover that Naruto doesn't intend to blackmail or humiliate, or just as a one-night stand.