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June 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I was definitely reminded of Eroninja while reading this, though this Naruto is using his own techniques and skills to "get it on" for Jiraiya's "peace". I liked these two chapters though. Starting with Samui is random yet not implausible. I would like to see Naruto get Karin next. Having a new goal in his life, Naruto could run into Sasuke and decide it might be better to just have someone keep an eye on the traitor for him instead of Naruto always wondering about what Sasuke is doing.
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June 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This story is definitely just as good as eroninja's and c0pycat's stories, if not better. Seriously, keep it up
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June 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, please continue soon as for the list why not include Inuzuka Hana Kiba´s sister her been the Heiress of the clan would give him political power within Konoha too.
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June 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, Damn. This was fantastic, and Naruto's character is awesome because it's all natural to him and not some bloodline or outside influence. Looking forward to the rest.
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June 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I think you should add Hinata for her clan and the fact that she is one of the hottest ladies of the Naruto universe.
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June 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Excellent start and good basic plot.
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June 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hot dame I think that was one of the best lemons ive seen . I say keep going I dont think anyones tried a story like this
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June 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'd love if you could work in Naruto's superiority to the Raikage and/or Killer Bee to this story. Like maybe Mabui has been with one or both of them and is a certified size queen, but then Naruto comes along and totally outclasses them in both size and skill.
Also, maybe include Karui? And a line similar to "make me a black slut for that huge white cock". ;)
Also, maybe include Karui? And a line similar to "make me a black slut for that huge white cock". ;)
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June 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story. That was amazing. I'd love to see one with Karin. Heck maybe Karin and Tayuya. If you could retcon it, maybe femHaku too.
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June 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good start to this story. I liked the set up and very good descriptive lemons. I do hope that Naruto will grow stronger on his own despite the perverts lack of teaching.