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June 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
There are several people who Itachi didn't kill so I don't understand the premise of this story. Ariana and Eric are no where near Japanese names so they don't fit the setting. The characters don't even have the physical traits of the uchiha (tan skin and blue eyes). It seems to me that you are writing your own Mary Sues in a Naruto plot...but it's not working.