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get Kushina pregnant with Bebo Zakushi baby

plz write more

Hi, how are you? You did yet another wonderful chapter. You have what it takes to become one of the great Naruto adult fic writers. You are highly descriptive of the sex scenes and u aren't afraid to write kinky stuff.

I was wondering if you would be so kind to write my challenge fic whenever u get a chance. I posted it on the forums. I think your writing style is perfect for my fic. This is the link

http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php/topic/51017-sakura-babysitting-fic/

Please please accept it. If you don't like the plot and you want to change it I'm willing to hear new ideas. Please post on the forum and let me know if u can do it or send me an email.

Thank you for your time and I hope you do my challenge.

Kinkyking

great job on the new chapter. cant wait to see what u do for anko since u used it for the tsunade already. heres a idea u could have a group of boys run into anko and make her drop her dango on the ground and she gives chance and corners them in a ally were she makes them repay her losing her food. but have to wait and see still great job

This chapter seems kinda rushed. Was wondering, seeing as how quite a few of these are girls Naruto's age having sex with boys (mostly Kon) that now, as Naruto comes into the picture, alongside the shouta going on we see Naruto getting with older women, most of which are married with/without children (Kushina, Yoshino, Tsume, Tsunami, Kurenai etc)

I like how slutty Kushina is without being cruel or adulterous. It's a fresh change. It'd be even hotter if she tells Naruto about it.

As for Naruto, I figured you would have had him know about Sakura and just not care - he's been banging his mum and he IS the Hokage, after all.

I would like to see the girls with older men too!!!!
Great story!!!Congratulations!!!!!

I think Kushina deserves a chapter for her!!!!
Make a orgy with the parents fucking their daughters hiashi/sakura/Ino Shukaku?Hinata/TenTen Inochi/Temari Minato/Hinata

4th chapter may have been short but still was good wish it was a little longer but what can u do. have to wait and see what u come up with in the next chapter

Love the story and the shouta, as well as how you protrayed all the girls, my only complaint would probably be the OCs but other than that great story!