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December 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
What can I say? I loved it!
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December 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
plz write more
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August 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
get hinata cheating pussy pregnant
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July 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is a super hot PWP. Unfortunately, I feel people have given it a lower rating mostly because Sasuke is the main character, and not for truly legitimate reasons (poor grammar, bad sex, etc.) I think that's a real shame because I think you're one of the better lemon writers on this site, so people who didn't give the fic a chance are missing out. I was impressed by how different each of the sexual scenarios played out, depending on the women involved. The sex with mousey Ino was rightfully a lot tamer than what happened with Shizune and Tsunade, both of whom maybe seemed a little more into each other than they were with Sasuke. Actually, all of the women seemed to be having sex with Sasuke for different reasons, none of which were romance, except for Hinata, who Sasuke seemed more attached to than the others...? Maybe? I think if there was one thing I was missing in this fic it was a timeline. Was Sasuke sleeping with all of these women at the same time, or were these different lovers he had over time? Like maybe Sakura was his first and then he dumped her because of his promise with Ino and then after that one time with Ino he moved on to TenTen, etc. And how did all these previous conquests lead up to him getting Hinata, I didn't quite see the connection there. Other than wanting a tiny bit more plot with my PWP, I thought this was a great, fap-worthy fic over all. Awesome job SlaveNaruko!
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July 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was incredible. There's so many NaruoxHarem fics around here, so seeing a harem fic with someone else was a nice surprise. I do believe this has lots of potential for more chapters, having the RTN Sasuke as the main character would make for a fun story.
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July 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like it, there's been so many Naruto/Konoha women, it's good to see someone else have some fun. I'm aware that there's another Sasuke/various Konoha women fic, but this one shows Sasuke actually enjoying sex instead of being a cold fish. Too bad this only a one-shot, I would love to see more chapters.
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July 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Don't be bother by that first review. It's just some Naruto balls hugger mad because someone besides his hero is starring in this type of fic.
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July 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You strike again.
You have no idea how much I love your SasuHina porn. Thank you for this wonderful fic.
You have no idea how much I love your SasuHina porn. Thank you for this wonderful fic.
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July 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
incredible story we need more of Sasuke in these kind of stories
love the scenes hope to see more soon
love the scenes hope to see more soon
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July 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was so hot. I love Sasuke smut stories because everyone's so against them. Hey you think you can do a Sasuke/Kushina story? That would be so awesome.