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January 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this since day one, and I really hope you continue it!
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September 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
At 1st I didn't know what to think about this story, but I read it anyway and now I'm dying to find out what will happen next. I'm almost afraid to check the date this was posted because I fear it's been abandoned. I've always been a fan of Sasuke/Naruto so I'm new to this.
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October 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story my favorite story on this site and I'm not even a huge fan of the pairing
More please
More please
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August 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awsome story, I hope that itatchi is sincere in his caring for his pet. I am looking foward to more of this story and hopefully a happy ending.
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June 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well written chapter.
What I do not get or like is how Itachi is falling away from the Goal you portraied him to have, namly PROTECTING Naruto.
In this chapter he is only thinking about himself.
Quinn
What I do not get or like is how Itachi is falling away from the Goal you portraied him to have, namly PROTECTING Naruto.
In this chapter he is only thinking about himself.
Quinn
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June 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I wish for more
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April 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nice story so far.
Only problem I have is that the "master" also controls Narutos chakra, even against his will.
It would, for me, be nicer if the master can control Narutos chakra, and even Kyuubis, but that in the end, that is Narutos decicion.
In other words.
If Naruto does not like his master, he can take his cchakra back and fight the oone that claims too be his master.
It can even be explained.
1: Kyuubi would help his vessel
2: Naruto, as he himself, can use the chakra of nature.
with both of this it should be easy for him to take control of his chakra back.
It would also make the whole thing sweeter^^, for Naruto would have a chance, unlike now.
Oh, another point.
If possible, can you make a sub and uke Naruto that also is strong.
And with strong I mean that he is, in terms of power and will, equal or better than his partner.
It shouldn't matter much, as Itachie has more experience.
Of course, I will read on regardless.
Only problem I have is that the "master" also controls Narutos chakra, even against his will.
It would, for me, be nicer if the master can control Narutos chakra, and even Kyuubis, but that in the end, that is Narutos decicion.
In other words.
If Naruto does not like his master, he can take his cchakra back and fight the oone that claims too be his master.
It can even be explained.
1: Kyuubi would help his vessel
2: Naruto, as he himself, can use the chakra of nature.
with both of this it should be easy for him to take control of his chakra back.
It would also make the whole thing sweeter^^, for Naruto would have a chance, unlike now.
Oh, another point.
If possible, can you make a sub and uke Naruto that also is strong.
And with strong I mean that he is, in terms of power and will, equal or better than his partner.
It shouldn't matter much, as Itachie has more experience.
Of course, I will read on regardless.
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August 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The most perverted side of me is so happy!
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August 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I think I just came.... Great story!
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July 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story I hope you keep up with it!