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by Madea

schedule September 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This was so adorable and a wonderful take on NaruGaa! I couldn't stop 'Awww'ing and the sex scene was hot and perfect. Poor Gaara, his family sucks. But yeah, this was amazing. And I love how you did the gaming and everything in it. Great job with this.

Peace-Out ^-^v
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person Ryane_Foxx_
schedule August 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Eep! I was so into this :) I don't mind OOC if it is written well honestly and this was cute, sweet, flirty, tender, and hot :) so yay, loved it!
schedule July 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Don't be insecure at all... I loved this!!! Yes it's believable that Naruto fell for Gaara because he had already fallen for 'her' online and with them hanging out it was natural to fall back into the same habit of interaction they had online even though he was denying that he felt anything. The whole story is sweet. I liked insecure blushing Gaara who was so awkward that he was stalking Naruto even though he wasn't wanting to be a stalker. I just loved everything about it :)