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need more chapters

you can't leave it there!!!!

will admit right now, refresh this page so much looking for the next chapter :P

this story is very well written and I want, no , need to know what's going too happen

i woul love for Mizuke to survive and show Gaara their child. the amount of pain amd suffering shes going through. Maybe the baby's sand help in labour, maybe gaara ( with the help of the baby) is able to control the sand enough. maybe all three of them can talk to each other ( in their minds) in the labour and come through alive.

Well done and keep posting :)

Well it's good that they've come full circle, and I do wish to see that the notion of her being to birth Gaaras children comes into question, as whether the lack of Shukaku will make a difference, or if they can do a C section before the sand rips her apart.

I am in love with this story!!!! please keep writing and updating

honestly, it's so well written and it builds in the right places. It really is amazing

is it me or does that last bit in the lastest chapter seem to foreshadow something neither thought possible?

great story, I look forward to reading more