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Idk, Sakura using Hiraishin, Kiba "almost" being able to catch up to Naruto and Sasuke with those two being referred to as the strongest...if you're next fic (Naru/Hina) as you say doesn't depict a godly-Naruto that isn't canon-retarded and easily allows situations to occur where Hinata is fucked b other guys, or he loses a fight (even one) for a ridiculous simple reason, or despite his status as "strongest" or "one of top nin" he still gets bashed on by his friends......I think I'll quit fanfiction.

Aw, sweetness! Still steamy, of course, but that was fluffy. Even manipulative bitches deserve love. Can't wait for the epilogue!

I'm wondering if you could do a Naruto/Hinata fic or Naruto/Temari?

Very sexy and touching at the same time. I can't wait for the next part!

Kiba acts like a complete douche... he get's all the 'free love' he wants, without any form of jealousy from Sakura. But when Sakura finally caves in and get's it on with Kai, Kiba takes the most ravaging form of revenge on Kai.

I really hope the story will deal with this form of 'inequality' per your usual style of sexiness. Have Sakura forcing Kiba to watch as she services Kai (alone or in conjunction with the remaining kings for extra payback/voyeurism points). I can already picture it in my head. Edgy and smexy at the same time!

Regardless of how you intend to proceed. Keep it up!

sakura finally admitted to herself that she likes kai too! how exciting
I wonder what kyoko has planned?
feels like the tension is slowly building and something big (well, bigger than sano or the old lady spy dying) is gonna happen!
looking forward to the next few chapters

well, looks like sano is gonna die.
I'm really curious to see who this assassin is?? Doesn't seem to be Kai. It really could be anyone....its starting to get really exciting!
can't wait to read what will happen next

ugh! a tease, a snippet!
well, i look forward to reading the rest. Kai's background story was pretty tragic, if it was true.

Don't be distressed about bumping your story. people make mistakes, and we all learn from them

looking forward to the rest of the chapter!

This is a good story but it's annoying how you bring your other finished stories up to the top.

I didn't mean to make it sound like it was really really annoying or anything, I just sometimes miss other stories that get updated when you bump everything.

They're really good, and if someone goes to the first chapter and there's a link to the other stories then you don't have to keep bumping the finished ones.