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I still vote Hinata and I think Sakura shouldn't even get a chance for the very reasons Hinata mentioned. The only candidates I consider are Hinata, Sasuki, and Gaara-chan. And out of all of them, Hinata gets my vote. Especially since Sasuki seems to be supporting her over Gaara.

make Sasuki the first wife! Hinata and her should also have the children at the same time together!!

Personally, I will vote for (in order) : Hinata, Sasuki, Gaara and Sakura. The 3 last can change, but Hinata should definitely be the really first wife.
The reasons are :
- Hinata seems to be the only "official" girlfriend of Naruto
- Hinata asked Naruto to provide for her, implicitly asking to be with him and live with him and their children. And she asked it the first.
- Hinata is (certainly) pregnant from Naruto. And she did it before the 3 others.

Some could say that Gaara has a stronger political card than Hinata. A wedding between the Kazekage and the Hokage to be will link strongly Suna and Konoha together, and specially if Gaara is the first wife.
But :
- in case of multiple women, if the first wife is not the first to have a baby from the husband, it's a real shame on the first wife, and she can lost all her influence. This means that if Gaara is taken as first wife, but Hinata gave birth first (and that will certainly be), Gaara and by extension, Suna, will be ashamed. Politically, they can keep a grudge against Naruto, Hinata and by extension, Konoha. On the other hand, Gaara can still be second wife and save her dignity if they say that her ask to be married was after Hinata's wedding. They only have to say that she is so in love with Naruto that she doesn't care to be "only" 2nd and Naruto has to show that his wives are treated equally (which he sure will do).
- Naruto doesn't give a shit of politics, or at least he puts feelings much higher than politics. Taking Gaara as first wife is a kind of a punch in Hinata's face : she is Naruto's girlfriend and not Gaara. I do not see (won't understand) if he choose Gaara before Hinata : Hinata will be extremely sad and feel kind of betrayed (even if she can understand the politics), and Naruto knows it. If Naruto still does it (taking Gaara as first), it's a Naruto completely out of character.

All of that brings Hinata as first wife to be taken. The other numbers can be discussed, but I don't think I will understand if you don't put Hinata as first (except if you kill her or put her in a coma or if she betrays Naruto something like that).


That aside, your story is very good and really original. The only reproach I can do is : you are a hell of a tease ! You rise the sex temperature perfectly, but sometimes, when it's about to reach the pic, you change the scene, or you finish the chapter there... ! ^^

I vote for Hinata as first wife, she's my favorite and she is going to be the first one to have Naruto's kids.

I hope Kumiko and Naruto are able to turn Obi completely to their side with all the love she's getting, that might throw a big wrench into Madara's plans.

Great chapter. I believe Sakura should get a chance

Actually, I would have to disagree that the Ten-Tails is not evil. At best, it is greedy (doesn't want humanity to evolve past what it thinks is 'best') with it's "I want 'my' Chakra back!" insanity.

"When you can do something like that without getting in trouble, being bothered by inclement weather, or feeling emasculated, then why the hell wouldn't you? :P"

Because teleporting is faster?

I really wanted to see Kumiko get down and dirty with the two maids. With all her experience, she should be able to blow their minds so much they will gladly keep their new lives in the real world.

I would have liked to see more of Hinata and Sasuki's time together. I can't wait to see Gaara-chan and what she's like.

Bring on Tenten as well as Naruto and Ayame flavored ramen... and make a combo dish of the two if possible.

Sasuki and Hinata kissing was hot... bring on hot bisexual girl sex!!!!